Suicide
A poem that questions the morals of life. Finally, an acrostic poem with substance.
| Comments on article "Suicide" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Rose |
Interesting. It has a lot of meaning. I liked it. |
12/4/2009 |
| DARKKNIGHT |
I REALLY LIKE THE POEMS THOUGH I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE DARK AND DEPRESSING POEMS ABOUT DEATH IN PARTICULAR |
11/11/2009 |
| Nashyah |
this poem makes me think 4 the longest i have been suffering im in residential dealing with lifes downfalls thank you |
11/3/2009 |
| BELLA |
AWESOME!1 |
10/20/2009 |
| Maria Calkins |
this is exactly how i feel.Everyone is so much called silly to dislike others . |
5/13/2009 |
| kieri |
cool i am just like that |
5/1/2009 |
| jordan. |
very good.
nice nice |
3/24/2009 |
| alone |
Who Are You?
Empty like a grave just waiting
to be dug and filled with tears,
my broken soul drifts in a deep
black abyss of intense desolation.
Each individual scar upnon my
trampled and tossed- out heart
stings sharply and I grasp icy air
trying to keep from plunging down.
A prisoner within my own mind I
can't see past the dirty memories
of what you have done to
cause me to tumble into myself.
Whimpering from the searing pain
burning its way through my numb heart
I glimpse the crushed eyes that
define my torn insides in the mirror.
Those unhappy eyes plead me to acknowledge
the very question which has lost its
answer when my world had gone black;
Who are you? |
3/10/2009 |
| allie |
LOVED YOUR POEM! |
6/19/2008 |
| bianca. age 16 |
yea it should of been longer but its alright .
i like it for what it is |
5/30/2008 | |
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