Vampire's Slave Chapter 1
This story is about a teen girl that is 18 years old who has many family problems. She has been bullied ever since she was in middle school, but one night after school from a long walk something happened.
| Comments on article "Vampire's Slave Chapter 1" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Lou Lou |
I liked the later ideas, but I think the gang stabbers detracted from that. I liked your characters though. |
10/9/2008 |
| DarkDragon |
i like it! Just put a little more punctuation marks to make it easier to read and it'll be perfect! |
8/8/2008 |
| Dev O |
Great First Chapter. The opening paragraph didn't make much sense though. Other than that it was well written! |
6/17/2008 |
| Christiane |
This story is good so far...Write More |
5/22/2008 |
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