** What She Doesn’t Know.. Vol. 1
** The boys don’t want their girls to know what happened in the past... but all hell brakes lose when the past catches up with them and there’s nothing to stop it...
| Comments on article "** What She Doesn’t Know.. Vol. 1" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Jenny |
why didnt you finish this story? its terrific...the best one ive read yet! |
8/14/2008 |
| Kellie |
plzzzzzzzzzz hurry up and post vol.2! im begging u! |
7/15/2008 |
| Kelly |
Not too bad. I like the story line, but I think if your sentances flowed a bit more, that would make it more pleasant to read. Good job building tension though. |
5/10/2008 |
| Alanaa |
This story was great i can't wait for the next one! |
5/5/2008 |
| Lunar . |
It's, erm, alright.. but your sentences are way to choppy that it made me lose interest.. Try putting the shorter ones together instead of just have 5 word sentences over and overy, that way it'll go smoother. |
5/2/2008 |
| Yara |
I really like it... Pls post the rest of it quickly |
5/2/2008 |
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