| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| unknown |
its ok but u got off topic |
11/11/2009 |
| janice |
goofy |
6/14/2009 |
| lil black |
i love this right here |
6/5/2009 |
| lilly |
not really that emo...i dont get the toe n cooking? |
5/26/2009 |
| jacqueline b |
ummmm pretty good, i dont get the toe part |
5/26/2009 |
| Me :) |
OMG I LOVED IT! |
5/25/2009 |
| tiffany |
sweet! |
5/23/2009 |
| Black Eyes |
i thing is really nice poem.. hope all your dreams come true |
5/22/2009 |
| lily |
thats really good is this how u really feel |
5/11/2009 |
| elena |
nice one love it ... this is soo me and my bf. |
5/4/2009 |
| jello lover |
wow ur stupid why wud u say somethin bout ur toe and cutting ur wrist down by the bay? you make no sense? |
3/25/2009 |
| gianna loker |
this is the worst poem i read |
1/25/2009 |
| J3SSIKA |
dis iish is waKKK dude are u cirilce...wut made you right the waKKK CRAP IN FIRST PLAS3 |
1/22/2009 |
| Non' ya |
hmmmm, it started out great but then you started saying stuff about your toe and cooking about you dont believe in the heavens above...cmon why write about stuff like that? seriously...are you like atheist or something? |
1/19/2009 |
| jazmin |
dats not sad at all man |
12/19/2008 |
| emma |
i liked ur trust in writing this , i didn't like the meaning of ur words but i liked ur way in writing , so i hope soon read something else has a different meaning . luck with u |
11/12/2008 |
| bobbie peoples |
i liked your poem its KOOL
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9/20/2008 |
| monica |
i would never write such a thing "the devil i love" and actually mean it. omg kid grow up. |
8/28/2008 |
| Brandon |
Awesome! |
7/17/2008 |
| Drew F. |
Nice.
I like it :)
it's sad, yet symbolic...
:( |
5/25/2008 |
| Cleo Gerdes |
Wasnt Bad. I liked it. :) |
5/9/2008 |
| 2 books not pub |
It was amazingly sicking but yet so beautiful Im not much foe rythmin gpoems but this is great.
Not to emo just convaing emotion. |
5/1/2008 |
| Resha |
i think this is a really good poem with much description of your emotions, its a tad bit depressing but its really good, you are evry good with using words. good job and keep it up |
4/28/2008 |
| Janie |
I liked it. The ending was a bit off for me. But I loved the begining |
4/28/2008 |
