Girl In The Cemetery
This really happened to me, and also had a dream and woke up with this lady sitting next to me.
| Comments on article "Girl In The Cemetery" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Levi Hoffman |
I Liked It...Pretty Solid Novel! |
10/18/2009 |
| C. Higdon |
It's good but could be better if you fix the misspelled words, i.e. wear should to be spelled - where. Also, add more action verbs to the story.
But overall a good short story. |
8/20/2009 |
| Brenda C. |
My father is a taxi driver and he saw a horrible shadow behind him when he was throughing a famous cementery in peru in san juan de Lurigancho district. Anyone could go and record voices of babies crying. my father hasn't slept deep since this day |
8/8/2009 |
| komal k |
scary |
5/31/2009 |
| KP |
Oh God! I dont understand what u wanna say in this story.. |
5/29/2009 |
| miranda |
A-A-A-A-M-A-Z-I-N-G |
5/25/2009 |
| miranda |
Very good |
5/25/2009 |
| Klavia D |
I think it was fabulas and exciting but I wish it was longer bcause I wanted to know more, lik what happened next |
5/4/2009 |
| jessy |
good story and kind of scary too. |
4/24/2009 |
| anju |
well done |
3/25/2009 |
| poop |
nice |
3/23/2009 |
| Kisten Mccarly |
l love your story but it was not a scary story.Have some more ideas. |
3/19/2009 |
| Kisten Mccarly |
This was not like the girl in the cemetery. Her brother said we have to go to the dvd store.lt was like the girl siting in a banch in the grave yard and a girl just looking at her, she tells her brother l saw a girl sitting in a banch.Her BROTHER stopped and justed turned around and said there is no one siting there.When she looks she see's no one there.Then the brother said there looks like a ghost but he is really liying.Please write a better, scary stories.This story was not like a scary story. |
3/19/2009 |
| Chanel |
i love this story a lil weird but it was pretty good i want to knw wats going to happen next! |
3/13/2009 |
| Anonymous |
Why would the girl be ready for bed at 7:30? |
12/31/2008 |
| corrine j |
hi mark west your short story is pretty good i like it ,i love ghost stories i like when there a ghost and there nobody there it's really cool ♥ well bye |
12/17/2008 |
| daniel |
kool story |
12/17/2008 |
| Ernesto |
nice story dude |
12/17/2008 |
| Alondra Torres |
Hey. My name is Alondra and I really enjoyed reading your story. I think your story is kind of scary . If I was the girl I will be scared to see a ghost in the cemetery.I like how it was written. You should add more things to it .Maybe write a short chapter book. |
12/17/2008 |
| jimm |
I dont like this it's not got any suspence and most sentenses start with we . It was basicly boring. |
12/11/2008 |
| JENIFER S |
WHEN I WAS READING IT I GOT TOTALLY FREAK OUT BUT ITS A GOOD ONE |
12/3/2008 |
| Katy |
that was horrible. get a life. |
9/26/2008 |
| yom ama |
it like a buger nasty dumb and green |
5/2/2008 | |
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