I Should Have Gone To Bed
Going out for a sandwich at night can be dangerous.
| Comments on article "I Should Have Gone To Bed" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Hairy bum |
Well maybe you should have went to bed and not have written this pathetic story. |
12/6/2009 |
| me |
too funny! |
11/11/2009 |
| Paul |
It was a great story! |
5/4/2009 |
| anf666 |
hahaha not funnu |
3/28/2009 |
| Valentine |
very good keep up the good work |
3/12/2009 |
| Kanchan |
It was refreshing and entertaining...Thanks |
2/26/2009 |
| Tanya |
brilliant ! :D |
2/23/2009 |
| LionHeart |
The character was great- funny side thoughts, etc
however, I don't believe there is a subway in an area that is not very developed. Like Lou Lou, I think the piece was a bit incongruent.
But the character was very likeable and would like to see him again in another story! |
2/18/2009 |
| Amelia |
Loved it. I wished it was longer. |
1/20/2009 |
| shan |
haha the story is funny! Nice one. |
1/12/2009 |
| Medha |
Very interestingly written! Liked it a lot |
12/3/2008 |
| bill h |
don't order chinese. |
11/26/2008 |
| sparklingsand |
Fluid writing style . njoyed it very much . Thanks, Alan . |
10/25/2008 |
| Lou Lou |
I thought that the pieces were a little incongruent. It wasn't realistic and a little random, but I Iiked the quirks you gave your main character. |
10/9/2008 |
| PrinceEdwardIII |
hahaha! that was very funny. I am actually reading this for a school project, believe it or not. Thank you for that. I like the way that you add entirely irrelevant information in the middle of the action for comic value. very entertainting. |
10/7/2008 |
| d's nutz |
dis SCRIPT waz funni DEN A MUG, breh... |
10/7/2008 |
| Neil MacLean |
Read all of your bits. Great stuff! |
9/15/2008 |
| Star |
that...was funny |
8/8/2008 |
| Twalha |
Hilarious! |
7/15/2008 |
| vinnie |
hahah nice one my friend...like ur sarcasm :) |
7/3/2008 | |
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