The Angel's Heart (Part 2) of Chapter 1
An Evil is taking hold of Spain. Meet Miguel and Maria, It's obvious they've got the hots for one another. But will they battle out the darkness to finally be together??
| Comments on article "The Angel's Heart (Part 2) of Chapter 1" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Alex Reilly |
Good idea but mabye a little less kissing. Also very well written. |
7/22/2008 |
| A-Lost-Angel |
this is a very gwd story i am a skilled sword fighter myself and thought u have a very creative hand.
Fangk u |
7/17/2008 |
| Christiane |
Great story so far please continue |
5/19/2008 |
| TUNY |
ALL CARDS ON THE TABLE...NO BACKGROUND TO LITTER THE STORY LINE.....SLICED... |
4/28/2008 |
| serenity |
oh my god! You have to keep going on this one as well. Its proving to be even more interesting then Dark Temptation. |
4/22/2008 |
| Lucky |
Please continue to write the next article on dark temptation. |
4/15/2008 |
| Mohana |
You have got exception story telling skills.Please do continue to write articles. |
4/15/2008 |
| enzyme |
You really should continue. This is about the 7th time I'm attempting to send a comment, clueless on what was wrong with my last.
Well, you should reduce repetitions of words. It makes me pause to think and recall and judge. You've got the ability to pull my eyes through the words faster, way faster than Harry Potter. You have to keep on writing, I'll really appreciate it. Ideal for a fast read before jumping into bed. Thanks. |
4/11/2008 |
| Pebbles |
keep up the good work:) |
4/11/2008 |
| Elzette |
I actually like it alot and my friend as well. I think all three has potential, A Dark Tempation, A Deadly Game and also this one I read right now. I'm waiting to read the other chapters. |
4/11/2008 |
| lacie |
this is good very romantic in way u should keep writing this but i still want ot no what happens next in the dark temptation so yae |
4/10/2008 |
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