The Day It All Went Wrong
Love went too far...
| Comments on article "The Day It All Went Wrong" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| geghe |
very good, i like your story |
9/9/2009 |
| KP |
Touchy Story! |
5/29/2009 |
| ZeeJay |
I don't really understand the story, but if there are lesser grammerticle mistakes, it should be quite a touching story. |
3/16/2009 |
| me |
sad! |
3/12/2009 |
| Debjani |
Come on... your story is good ... but your language ... i could not understand half of it... maybe you should think of editing... |
3/2/2009 |
| Leidame |
That made...Absolutely no sense. |
1/19/2009 |
| Saad Khan |
Very Good Story Indeed..
I really lOVED iT.. |
11/15/2008 |
| steven |
not a good story. i see where you tried to add a twist but to be honest its quite a bad one, and by that i mean its a bad twist in writing, not as its a scary bad twist. also, the story doesn't make enough sense, it is also very unoriginal. |
10/30/2008 |
| aNONYMOUS |
NOOB! |
10/20/2008 |
| Di |
Now I kind of think you need to rewrite this whole thing. This was absolutely terrible! |
9/2/2008 |
| ashley |
ok to be true i did not understand ANYTHING that happend |
8/31/2008 |
| huh |
i dont get it... what? it was way too hard to read |
8/27/2008 |
| Belle |
This was a really nice story. Sad, but nice! |
5/2/2008 |
| Jay |
it was sort of comfusing. Like the general idea and the turn of things. |
4/17/2008 | |
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