Haunted Soul: Chapter 1- Nick

This is re-done, and kind of corrected, I'm still working on it and all soo.. Give me a break; OA girl named Rain Wulche, is having trouble controlling her powers and blocking the threats of enemies.. Will she survive? A scream will interrupt her training...
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mel w AWESOMENESS! 9/21/2009
Geo That was good ....no..... great, fatastic, out standing. I haven't read a decent story, then found this site and your story. THANKS 4/23/2008
Kay Landers I liked it it was tight! 4/13/2008
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