At the Station - I Met Life
A short story of a girl whose wait for her train, and her conversation with a stranger, showed her the way to her life...read on
| Comments on article "At the Station - I Met Life" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Bittu |
The story is amazing but not everyone can follow this coz everyone is not so lucky like u.Some have to sacrifice for their family.Actually its not a sacrifice but it is the gratitute to the parents. |
6/19/2008 |
| Tanya |
the story was excellent, but you really do need to look over your tenses and grammar. elaborate more in your language skills, because that's the only way you can spread your ideas, which in this case, are great. |
4/11/2008 |
| Kasvini |
You should check your sentences and beware of your tenses. Otherwise, yours is quite an engaging story. You might try to breathe in, relax and use more metaphors or flowery words. Flowery words are annoying but sometimes, they are just what tasteless cup of tea need. |
4/9/2008 |
| Lisa |
RE-edit.
Conept was good, delivery-not so good |
4/7/2008 |
| Doom Sayer |
Extremly stupid. |
3/27/2008 |
| Doom Sayer |
Ridiculous. |
3/27/2008 |
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