Killer Night
A girlfriend going out with her new boyfriend. They are having the time of their lives, when suddenly it turns dark. The girl meets her untimely demise in the hands of someone very unsuspected.
| Comments on article "Killer Night" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Lucy |
It's awsome and it also gives a lesson |
9/6/2008 |
| I'm sad now |
um... how sad |
8/27/2008 |
| Xitij |
loved it bro
brilliant stuff |
8/23/2008 |
| Craig |
I thought it wasnt to bad. It wwas defo to short and predictable but it was ok just the same. |
7/10/2008 |
| Someone like U |
At the part wher the girl went to the car for their coats.. you should have let her death lead up.. it happened way to fast. it was like..she walked up the car, died, and then the end..it was a good story though, so you should KEEP writing... |
4/21/2008 |
| A reader |
A very predictable story..
Not too bad thogh
Try harder
Good luck!! |
4/11/2008 |
| Marcela |
I think it was too short and it didn't have enough detail and enough action |
4/1/2008 |
| Marcela |
I think it was too short and it didn't have enough action |
4/1/2008 |
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