My Last Flame

It’s really short... I know it needs work and I’m open to suggestions so tell me what you think and if there is anything I can do to make it better! plz.!
Comments on article "My Last Flame"
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Cleo Damn It Man!! Thatz an awsum as poem right there!! x 3/21/2008
savanna your poems are really good. i know how you feel too.
i've liked a guy for a long time. it is hard to get over them...
He dosent even notice me		 3/7/2008
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