Hunted Soul - Chapter 1

A girl named Rain Wulche, is having trouble controlling her powers and blocking the threats of enemies.. Will she survive? A scream will interrupt her training...
Comments on article "Hunted Soul - Chapter 1"
Name Views and CommentsDate
vicky i think you should continue but who is the person rain's talking to?
Is the person a girl or a boy		 8/5/2008
lacie ok so who is this person fighting a lion? and yes keep going 4/19/2008
Dawah Hahaha.
Yea, I know.. I'm bad with grammar.
=P
Shhh. I try my best. ;O		 4/3/2008
Xyz threw = past tense of throw, as in, to throw a ball across the yard. Through = preposition, as in, through the forest, through my mind.
when using quotations: "Well, now," he said. see the comma before the quotation marks?		 3/22/2008
not needed yea you should, id like to hear more of it 3/1/2008
angel do keep goin!! 2/29/2008
Leann K. Sure, why stop. 2/26/2008
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