Once A Cheater, Always A Cheater - Story 2
Here is another love story. The moral is once a cheater, always a cheater!
| Comments on article "Once A Cheater, Always A Cheater - Story 2" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Jodi Ann |
what a jerk. love the story! |
8/26/2008 |
| sum1 |
just...not good at all.
you jumped around. no one knew what you were talking about.
does your school teach proper grammar? if not, you are in for a rough life. :/
this is the second story you have put on here, and neither one of them are that great.
maybe you should work on it some more before posting it on here if you dont like to hear what he have to say |
5/30/2008 |
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I am wondering if you ever took english classes .. ? Do you read? or anything? honestly, what do you think of what you wrote?
also, a tip: A good story has a good plot, builds tension .. ya know? |
5/13/2008 |
| Savannah |
I thought the story could have been longer but other than that it was alright but it was still boring. |
2/25/2008 |
| anonymous |
Waste of space. |
2/22/2008 |
| Paul |
amateur, unrealistic and not well constructed. |
2/17/2008 |
| liz |
you pretty much couldnt be worse |
2/14/2008 |
| ray |
this is a horrible horrible submission and is utterly pointless |
2/13/2008 |
| disappointed |
I think this story is horrible. Whoever wrote this mess has no sense of style or creativity and an english class OR 10 wouldn't hurt either. |
2/12/2008 |
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