Story 1
This is a love story I made. There is a whole lot more!
| Comments on article "Story 1" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| HerOfTheTormntd |
i agree with CHRIS. lovely story idea. try to make more coversations. |
11/20/2008 |
| asal |
hi that very good! |
7/26/2008 |
| CHRIS |
This comment is for WOW. I don't see why you would think that this story should be removed that it made u sick just reading it. Is it because you never had that feeling happen to you and u are just jealous. Well get over it she wanted to tell her story about her first love at first sight guy just like any other girl does. SO BACK OFF AND GET A LIFE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! |
6/26/2008 |
| growup |
you seriously need to have someone proof read this.
most all of the other stories on here have been proof read some what...yours is just...eck. sorry, it needs some work. I'm not trying to be mean, im just trying to help you.
you should not be in love at age 12 |
5/30/2008 |
| Tanya |
the story IS cute, but written incorrectly...perchance a grammar check would help? not to mention, try to find a more suitable ending, and stick to your main ideas, don't skip from one place to the other...but the essence is good, especially if it's your first story. how old are you? |
5/19/2008 |
| aman |
dude its very very cute there was purity in it .i wished thet i had love story like this in my school. |
3/5/2008 |
| cierra |
this is a miserable piece of trash |
2/13/2008 |
| Wow.... |
Oops, sorry. I mispelled spare, my bad! |
2/12/2008 |
| Wow.... |
This story is sickening, please spaer everyone else on the web and remove it immediately. I'm depressed just from reading this garbage, I think I'm going to go throw up.....
Ok, I'm back. What's with all the switching tenses, the EXTREME lack for subject-verb agreement and all other elements necessary to create a decent story? I hope whoever wrote this is middle school-aged or younger because if they're not it just proves why I'm so upset with America's school system. |
2/12/2008 |
| Hailey |
excuse me?u better watch it or i'll report u!if u dont like it just dont send a comment |
2/11/2008 |
| me |
it's so bad and stupid |
2/11/2008 |
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