In The Lake At Sunset..
Hello, This is my 1st story.. It is a short romance, A about a boy & a girl in the lake when the sun sets!! Have a look & enjoy! Please tell me what you think by doing the poll... Cheers!
| Comments on article "In The Lake At Sunset.." |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Tom |
I really enjoyed it. As always, that juxtaposition between the immediacy of the character's actions and the perpetuity of nature's beauty creates a wonderful effect. I would say Hemingway-esque, particularly associable with some of his earlier works (i.e. 'In Our Time')
Keep up the good work! |
3/6/2008 |
| amanda |
the end is very confusing |
3/5/2008 |
| jamie |
I think you should edit just a tad more and you could be so good =], how old are you btw? |
2/29/2008 |
| Tammy |
Lots of grammatical errors, that took away from the story. There was nothing new about this piece we have seen the scene in many other stories and on TV. A young couple that frolic and play and like each other... there was nothing refreshing, innovative or captivating about this story. |
2/28/2008 |
| Gary Dawson |
This is the best story I've read on here yet. It is very well written and I hope to see more of your stories here. |
2/6/2008 |
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