Helpless
My cousin died April 17, 2006. Here is how I felt the night he died. I was there when it happened. I was in it. Comment please…
| Comments on article "Helpless" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Christine |
very moving x |
7/7/2009 |
| Maggie O. |
Christina - your poem is beautiful. I'm so sorry for your loss and pain. |
5/31/2009 |
| C |
Geez Was I good...what do you think? |
2/10/2009 |
| Monkey |
You were in a tornado! I feel so sorry for you! I don't know what i'd do if any of my cousins died. Especially some. It is a really good poem, with not to much detail but enough to understand what is happening. |
1/4/2009 |
| mercedez |
Wow that is deep but you know what my cousin commited suicide in april of 2006 he was in his early twentys i miss that kid i realy like you writing |
10/30/2008 |
| Joey |
Damn u got talent |
4/15/2008 |
| Linsey |
i think that in the lines that say
No one can stop it
Just flee and cry
No one can prevent it
All one can do is [cry]
that word should be try.
it sorta sounds better with try just giving a lil input but its a great poem |
4/1/2008 |
| landa |
that is so sad im so sry |
3/15/2008 |
| camie |
that was really good. expressed alot |
3/12/2008 |
| anand swaroop |
actually i meant.. "the fewer his years, the fewer his tears" |
2/29/2008 |
| ANAND SWAROOP |
u r a real genious...that u hav well proven fm ur poetry..... i m really moved till bottom...but dont giv up dear.... its the natures's need..
remember this alwayz... THE FEWER HIS YEARS, THE FEWER HIS TREARS..!!
TAKE CARE |
2/29/2008 |
| anand swaroop |
is quite a gud poems n really needs appriciation |
2/29/2008 |
| cherish |
That was good |
2/19/2008 |
| kelly |
this is really good you can feel the emotion on it |
2/8/2008 |
| Tori |
i know how ya feel. i never been in a tronado but i now about feeling hopeless |
2/7/2008 |
| David Iron Bear |
Geez that is so sad. Good poetry. I am so sorry. |
2/4/2008 |
| Wyoming |
my baby cousin died when he was only 4 months old. i felt exactly like this. in April on the 21,2008 he'll be gone for a year. |
1/30/2008 | |
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