Razor
Short poem I wrote one night while I was trying to take my life…tell me what y'all think
| Comments on article "Razor" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Emma C |
This poems reminds me of how when i almost took my life from my family and this poem has made me feel that lifes too short to loose and that we shouldnt do anything that we regret.
i like this poem heaps xx |
3/25/2008 |
| Missy |
i think thats very relatable to me. i used to cut my wrists but my boyfriend and best friend would get so mad and conviced me to stop. i was going through a rough time im only thriteen and in october my brother died(he was only 20) his wife and him got into a car accident shes fine. my older sister (27) and her boyfriend who i was VERY close too i found out were doing heorin. the guy i LOVE woould always make fun of me and make me feel like nothing. me and my mom would always have the worse fights you could ever imagine.my anger came back after i found out my brother died now im starting to be able to control it again by doing cheerleaing and hip hop dance; my favorite sports. whenever i do them i forget about all my anger. |
2/18/2008 |
| Rose |
i have friends who does that but they won't stop cutting themselves, i try to let them stop but they will say "its very hard to stop" and they died the next day....... |
2/13/2008 |
| lifesuxs |
i think it explains wht ur feeling when everything is cavin n.......... this wht I want to do so bad but I cant leave my bro..... keep writing cuz ur gd..... |
2/1/2008 |
| Harv |
Great!
Though I don't like the ending (remember - this is just my point of view), or well..., I like it, but in some way, I would have stopped writing after "One last time".....
It would sort of keep the reader with this "Oh no - what now"-feeling...,
(well, the reader is me - I might be speciel in this...)
instead of only the "Oh no"-feeling...
Oh, well..., I hope you can understand - if not, don't bother!
~Harventh, |
2/1/2008 |
| kayu,la |
-please helpyourselfyourweiord.
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1/28/2008 | |
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