Night Terror

There is only the stench of sweat and the muffled inhalations of tortured lungs. Mine.
Comments on article "Night Terror"
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damein It wasnt bad, but i think you need to do a little more research into physcology. Also, i dont know weather its just me, but ive read about seventy short horror storys and i think this is the 38th to be along these lines, so i think its becoming quite a common crutch of short horror, though im not sure why. Anyway i think youve got some talent, so keep practicing. 11/19/2008
no of ur biznis i thnk there r betta stories on earth! 7/27/2008
Blue This is a good story, it had me interested from the star, it was a bit confusing til i got the gist of it. overall a good job! 5/29/2008
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