Litith Queen of the Vampires Chapter Two

Lilith start to drink Justin’s blood, and as she does, she see’s her people coming back to life.
Comments on article "Litith Queen of the Vampires Chapter Two"
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moi, huh? i didnt get that. 11/8/2008
Kirin reallly good please contiune! 6/8/2008
Kerilyn Hi-5 on the story!! Can't wait for the upcoming chapters 4/10/2008
JKYLIE i love the story line! my suggestions would be to pay closer attention to grammar, and use more sentence variety; right now you use mostly short sentences, which makes it a little boring. Try using both long and short sentences, and im sure people will find it more interesting.
Great story tho, Im looking forward to reading more. it's definitely better than i could do!!		 1/27/2008
Boredperson:( that was pretty good 1/12/2008
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