Christmas Youngblood

Every parent's worst nightmare...and then some...
Comments on article "Christmas Youngblood"
Name Views and CommentsDate
milly it was a good story, but the ending was a bit quick and vague. 11/10/2009
soccerchick sweet good read 4/13/2009
j-hamby DANG! Naw you cant jus leave me hangen like tht. too good. 4/6/2009
Jenn wow this is a good story... are you going to write more? 12/20/2008
Baby doll you should learn some manners 12/17/2008
baby joker YOU SHOULD ANSWER HER! 12/17/2008
baby "G" you should answer her. 12/17/2008
martha lonod well Mr;. I think you should plublish a book I thinkyou are3 a very good writer Ilove your storie . 12/17/2008
steven this is definately a good story in my opinion, except it could be extended to give more of a picture for the reader 10/30/2008
Bennie OMG that story is amazing... what happened at the end made my mouth open.. what was that .. it was heart stopping ... 10/10/2008
Justin I liked the twist at the end!
I kind of didn't see that coming! GOOD ONE!
9/24/2008
B L Remaley Jr I appreciate your feedback. All critiques, good or bad, I take very seriously with the hope of improving my work.

Thanks,

Birdine L Remaley Jr
8/20/2008
Sunny Crap! Stick to your day job. 6/25/2008
Belle Some people just aren't what they seem. 5/2/2008
Meghana Amazing story...
really a nice story
4/11/2008
kusha i wanted a story that i can write in my note so i djdn't read it
sorry
12/27/2007
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