The Corner
First love of a shy teenager.......well, basically how she found it reciprocated
| Comments on article "The Corner" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| D'Ondra |
That was a Very good story. You shoukd write the rest of it. |
7/16/2008 |
| Elena |
It was good...although it would've been cool if there was more like...uh OH !!! if there was more emotions, like adjectives, lie
"She suddenly went back into her shell, wondering why it was that she could never seem to get it just right with out someone else there, she couldn't believe that she was going to ruin her chance as she averted his eyes and started going down her lane" anyway...just like constructive criticism that's all (sorry if i sound like stuck up I'm not) |
5/3/2008 |
| Kitty Kat |
Its a okay story. btw keep up the good work
peace!
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2/27/2008 |
| good point |
Hey, roxy, that's a pretty good point. The closest I've ever gotten to that is this real mean nerd. |
1/27/2008 |
| roxy |
this story is about what all teen girls want, a shy sophisticated boy who cantell what there thinking and feeling even when they say something else. ITS NOT GONNA HAPPEN LADIES! get over it. it was well written and descriptive though. keep trying. |
1/18/2008 |
| Ashley (15) |
its very short but very well done if you should ever do a actual story on this you should definatly publish it send it to me if you ever want to try at FuryLover2007 at yahoo |
12/17/2007 |
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