Apart

I found this poem that I wrote a few months back. A poem about a girl who’s dying inside and trying to bleed out the hurt.....tell me what you think please
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rosie i like it i thought it was so simple yet it told so much in such a different way i cant help but remember my past cos of it, i love this poem 10/25/2008
jeanne i love this poem good job i like it verry much 4/10/2008
brittany very good poem I must say 2/12/2008
Hinata Miosuke Wow that was a very gewd one, i luved it =3 1/30/2008
darkfallz That is a very sad but great poem i think u have written it very well nice job i can relate to the feeling 12/12/2007
Amanda Piscopo omg i right the same kinda of poems like you do a poem like this never crossed my mined i think its really good .... 12/8/2007
Ashley I thought this poem is very understandable in so many ways ecspeciaaly of you are in that position of love. 12/7/2007
casiey thats was mad i loved it 12/5/2007
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