No more War!

I wrote this at school I'm 13 now. I was bored and we were doing a topic on murder so I wrote a poem on war. Please read and comment…
Comments on article "No more War!"
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lizbeth thats a tight poem 5/28/2008
william great poetry and expression a gift of poetry 2/26/2008
luke good 2/26/2008
crazy You should bring this poem to the white house. So bush can feel very depressed for making soliders go to war in Iraq 2/24/2008
Jada101 true poetry
why would they even think about war
and a lot of times war is over little thing on my opinion except the wars back then
good poem
2/22/2008
lozii:) hay ur poems awsum how old are u and where did u get yourinsperation from??
keep up the good work
2/10/2008
tanianator i actually might consider using your poem for my english assignment on war and peace 2/10/2008
tania great poem well done
 2/10/2008
narjis nikki your poemis really nice so i used it for my presentation 12/25/2007
Jordan Your poem was so true my dad sed to go to war and he is still alive and cured. Sometimes I wonder what happens there it makes me sad 12/17/2007
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