Her Emo Love Story

I dedicate this poem to my friend Lorianne. Its idea came from her and it's really very touchy. It's about an emo girl who discovered her boyfriend having an affair with somebody else. She loved him so much but she can't take the pain, so she killed herself.
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Jazzthevampires Awesome I love it
Beautiful
11/10/2008
someoneAlone I love this! its so sad, but its somethin that would happen 11/1/2008
michelle i like it a lot i think its good 10/28/2008
Alicia C.Malm graet job you really are talented i wish i could put my feelings out on papaer like you just did 10/22/2008
saity omg i love this 10/19/2008
Jameia D. Black acid tears run down my face at the thought of her wasted life, if they could fall to burn the boyfriends wickedness from his worthless body than all that would be left is a pool of my acid tears. I loved it very emotional, yes it's not the first of it's kind but it's written well about a topic that peaks my intrest and I myself write some very stereotypical dark poems, so what? 9/17/2008
sara i loved tat story so tue and stuff 9/13/2008
Raj Awesome very emotional 7/24/2008
joey that really sad but why did she kill her self for.. it is because she can't take the pain? 6/16/2008
OutsideTheBox Wow. How insanely cliche. I guess you couldn't think of anything original. How sad. 4/25/2008
lakoda that is so sad but in a way i would do the samme thing♥ I know what it is like to lose some one you love because my brother shot him self so ya♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ do you still talk to her well if you do then thats good and yes i mean the girl that gave you the idea and its horrible that that girl killed her self!!♥♥♥♥ In fact it was kinda the boyfriends fault because he was having the affair so ya we should totally meet sometime my email is lakodagriffin at sign yah oo com i had to space it so it will let me send it so e mail me peace 12/7/2007
angie o.m.g i love thiz poem i wrote it down myself 11/27/2007
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