Had Enough

A young man gains insight from the first sips of beer…
Comments on article "Had Enough"
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David thanks for the input
this is based on a true story, the girl who died was named Joy
7/1/2008
Taneshia When telling a story it should have more of a ending and beginning it started off well but I would have like to see more. If your focus point was don't drink and drive maybe the title could have suggested it. I thought from the title that the story would tell a boy's story of his first drink ,how smashed he was and why he wouldn't do that again 6/30/2008
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