The Old Town
Horror - I and my two friends Kendra and Lisa decided to take a trip to an old town....
| Comments on article "The Old Town" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| G |
horrible |
8/28/2008 |
| linn |
ok interesting |
8/24/2008 |
| linnea |
ok |
8/22/2008 |
| Proff. Chan |
too condensed, intro not complete. could use more description. finishing not very sensible |
3/16/2008 |
| Ella |
Okay. It reminds me of an anime, all that Kyoto demon and wand stuff. XD Your story isn't that scary. It didn't pull me in at all, and there was no climax or even surprises. I think you could have developed your plot better if you spent more time with it. There are also a few grammar errors. |
2/12/2008 |
| HorrorMaster |
You really need to stop writing horror stories. Another poor, poor excuse for a horror story. |
1/18/2008 |
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