I Need Your Opinion
Really…may be its not an important matter to you but it’s necessary for me so I am waiting for your comment because also its my first trying to write.
| Comments on article "I Need Your Opinion" |
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| Dionne |
I think she made the mistake when you lied about it. She should have just been honest about it from the start. She broke the trust in the relationship not by hanging out with a guy friend but by lying about it. |
12/4/2007 |
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Is this an introduction to your story? Because it is written in this manner. Thus it would be good for a synopsis, just shorten it up and use shorter tighter sentences, more concise. Also written in past tense which if fine,,however you revert to present tense during your intro. I hope this helps but its not written as a short story just yet. If you need help with fiction,or non-fiction I would happy to guide you. visit freewebs website dot calm and replace dot with .
then add /skilled-writer . My email is on the HOME page ok....Cheers and chin up! |
9/11/2007 |
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