You Don't Know what Lies Ahead...

I was watching Lord Of the Rings last night and I got this from one of the scenes.
Comments on article "You Don't Know what Lies Ahead..."
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Carli Good rhyming. The only thing I would work on is making it more understandable. Everyone writes a poem and sometimes only the author can really make sense of it. Others cannot. Its a gift that authors have. You are on your way. Keep up the skillful work. 5/15/2008
Bridget Musick I think it's cool but can you make it longer? I want to see what lies ahead of the poem 3/26/2008
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