"Noah Dowelsby: Alternate Ending"
Comments on article ""Noah Dowelsby: Alternate Ending""| Name | Views and Comments | Date |
| Carl | The Author has talent, but needs some schooling as a writer. One of the first rules is, show, not tell. Point of view should not change within scenes. As for the plot, I do not understand why he had to kill his wife because she discovered the remains of his murder victim, when he says he planned to tell her the whole story at "the right moment". Was he going to tell her and then kill her? Fiction has to be logical to be believable. |
10/21/2010 |
| reader | LOVED IT ! | 3/27/2009 |
| Mystery Lover | OMG this is the best storie EVER ! Keep writting stories you have an awesome talent ! I loved it ! It all sounded so reall ! :) |
3/27/2009 |
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