Noah Dowelsby
Noah Dowelsby's deadly secret leads to a cat and mouse game with a surprising conclusion.
| Comments on article "Noah Dowelsby" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| LexD |
I enjoy reading this story. Good work. |
12/7/2009 |
| j-hamby |
holy wow you're a really good writer. some things were kinda repetative but it was barely noticable. i liked it |
4/6/2009 |
| Harvey Keck |
Birdine,
This is your old buddy Harvey. Very good story. The alternate ending is better =) |
7/12/2007 |
| vic fortezza |
Birdine: I wish I'd read this story first, as I might not have seen the climax coming. It's good. It just needs tightening. Everything I said about the other story applies here, except that this one is not quite as overwritten as the other. Best of luck. |
5/19/2007 |
| Natasha |
Well, although the story and plot was good. The use of suspense wasn't quite as good as it could have been . I knew the ending before I even read it. I mean I'm not an expert, but all I'm saying is the story wasn't as suspenseful as I wouldv'e liked it to be. |
5/16/2007 |
| kallyminami |
This is awesome I love this story and I am happy for my step-dad that he is always getting his stories approved and, put on this web site! |
3/16/2007 | |
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