| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| zoe |
DANG! that was good i lik it |
7/1/2009 |
| Windy Roberts |
This is a beautiful poem. keep doing wat your doing ! |
4/29/2009 |
| brooke |
it`s very sad and heart-broken and touching and mature for a tweleve year old girl and i love it very much cause i`ve feel your pain! |
4/20/2009 |
| Hayle Ritchie |
wow you really can express how you feel about something? |
4/20/2009 |
| ruby |
I luv dis poem n it has da truth 2 it n a boy shud be thought a lesson...I think 4 a 12 years old u did a gr8 job...keep it up n write more |
3/21/2009 |
| deborah kropf |
that is really good it is what im like going through right now |
3/18/2009 |
| Brittany |
You're 12.. thats amazing
I'm Fourteen.. and i've experienced Something like this.. but i felt hollow withoug him.. and i couldnt even think about it.. none the less write about it. |
2/11/2009 |
| rebecca |
i'm the same age as the girl who wrote this and i couldnt't think of these to save my life itss really good |
1/18/2009 |
| Jack |
It rhymed, the figures of speech were ok. Still just some lame heart broken poem. The ending was really weak, like she got tired of writing. |
12/29/2008 |
| Krystle |
I dont know why exactly you wrote this poem but i am 16 and i just had a hard break up which caused me to change into someone i shouldnt have been. life is now getting better because i dont think of him much. i love your poem! |
12/22/2008 |
| amber |
this is what i would dedicate to my manm if he evert broke my heart id describes the both us of great |
12/15/2008 |
| amber |
i thought that an audlt wrote this. good writing!=] |
12/15/2008 |
| kendall:) |
whoever wrote this it was the sweetest thing in the world i can relate to all of that keep it up! |
10/11/2008 |
| Rebbca |
She's writing is perfect.I think,her heart is broken. |
10/9/2008 |
| ana maria |
i love this poem because everything you wrote thats exactly wat am going true |
8/22/2008 |
| Rachel H |
Girl u are so talented and i can relate, im 12 to and i can see ur even good 4 an adult! |
8/12/2008 |
| lucy |
its the sort of thing a 4 year old would right about a pet :S none of yu have been heart borken coz if yu had you would be dead ! its perfetic ! |
7/27/2008 |
| Courtney N |
im going through the same thing... im 12 to and the boy who broke my heart is my neighbor so i have to see him and hold back tears everyday... |
5/25/2008 |
| atalkatomucha18 |
That poem you wrote was very good! i write poems myself, keep up the good work! peace out! :) |
5/24/2008 |
| Tita |
Girl I didn't really understand your poem plus you are to young to fall in love I'm a teen too but don't trip thats just you I finally found the one I wanted to be with all my life but a bullet to the head and he has died I know you don't care cause it's my life... |
5/2/2008 |
| Denise |
Im 12 too n ur poem says the saim thing i did when gary broak up with me it is a great poem |
3/29/2008 |
| Katrinna |
I could feel this poem if I was going threw a situtation like this
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3/23/2008 |
| peacocks83 |
this proves the little people are growing up faster than they used to. but is ths a good thing???? |
3/8/2007 |
| marilyn |
i kno how you feel but it is just best to move on thats what i did |
3/2/2007 |
| angel k |
it was awsome.... especially since yer onlii 12. |
3/2/2007 |
| dark angel |
that was good hit close to home |
2/27/2007 |
| Adela |
thiz is a really like your poem its really nice!
good joB! |
2/26/2007 |
| felisha |
Sorry but it really wasnt that good |
2/26/2007 |
