Parent Ghost
This shall give you the creeps.....!
| Comments on article "Parent Ghost" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| mel w |
coolness |
9/21/2009 |
| reader101 |
good but not great u can probably do better though, also ur story should've been longer |
8/3/2009 |
| AHMED |
i want some stories more for 6 grade |
7/18/2009 |
| qwertyu |
it was scary |
9/10/2008 |
| Emozabeth |
Eh...not good. no character build up and, whats the point of the story? too abrupt. this isnt even considered a STORY! |
8/16/2008 |
| Nicole |
I just don't really get the point of it. What is it that you as the writer are attempting to get across to your audience? Also be careful with your verb tense - stick to one. |
9/19/2007 |
| tg |
sad ...that's all can say |
6/16/2007 |
| INDICA |
I THINK THAT WAS A DEMENTED, REPULSIVE, UNTALENTED STORY. |
6/4/2007 |
| Shayde |
It had a bad story line, it also wasnt written to good either. |
5/29/2007 |
| Georgie |
This is a load of crap, it has no story line, and i think you need to go to English classes, as half of it did not make sense. |
5/21/2007 |
| keera taylor |
do you know keera? |
4/2/2007 |
| kristen |
doesnt make snece |
3/6/2007 | |
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