Parent Ghost

This shall give you the creeps.....!
Comments on article "Parent Ghost"
Name Views and CommentsDate
qwertyu it was scary 9/10/2008
Emozabeth Eh...not good. no character build up and, whats the point of the story? too abrupt. this isnt even considered a STORY! 8/16/2008
Nicole I just don't really get the point of it. What is it that you as the writer are attempting to get across to your audience? Also be careful with your verb tense - stick to one. 9/19/2007
tg sad ...that's all can say 6/16/2007
INDICA I THINK THAT WAS A DEMENTED, REPULSIVE, UNTALENTED STORY. 6/4/2007
Shayde It had a bad story line, it also wasnt written to good either. 5/29/2007
Georgie This is a load of crap, it has no story line, and i think you need to go to English classes, as half of it did not make sense. 5/21/2007
keera taylor do you know keera? 4/2/2007
kristen doesnt make snece 3/6/2007
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