Hopeless Romantic

Wrote this when I was babysitting…not the best but please comment. I could use the feedback... =]
Comments on article "Hopeless Romantic"
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yvonne this is rlly good it reminds me of me and my best friend 4/3/2009
RALPH ITS NOT A SECRET IF YOU TELL THE WHOLE WORLD. DUH? 3/12/2009
Deanne thats really sweet :)
its really good am awful at doing poems
and my boyfriend wnts 1 in his card
u gt any ideas on hw i cud start it
x		 2/8/2009
mae it was a beautiful poem...although the story is tragic... 2/5/2009
Lariel Edmonds I love it. It was really good. 2/15/2007
Michael M. Well i would say tell that guy how you feel, it is just hurting you more knowing and pretending your just friends. talk to her tell her how U feel about her, mabey she will feel the same, mabey it was ment to be.

PS. I happen to be in the same situation		 2/15/2007
Lonely Charrita damn... i knw wat u feeling at this momment... i like the way u write and well u knw how to put words where they belong... Good Job... Keep It Up!!! 2/11/2007
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