Love Is A Game Of Lies And Pain To You
Comment me please. My first love was my inspiration to this poem... turns out he was a jerk.
| Comments on article "Love Is A Game Of Lies And Pain To You" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| rachel |
you sound like i did i went through the same thing.But hunny once i got away i felt free a huge burden was off of me.I wasnt allowed to look much less speak to another male but yet he could go and cheat on me.anyways u done a great job well said girl... |
11/20/2009 |
| Maria |
I mean sumtin similar happen to me like dat but I still love him n not let go 4 a reason...Keep it real I DNT NO IF I EVER WILL.. |
4/24/2009 |
| Lorena Gonzales |
this poem was de bessssttt everrr! =P
i loveee it...it also relates to meh so much! |
3/14/2009 |
| Han |
The end half of this poem flows better than the first half. The end half really struck a chord with me. Well done. |
8/19/2008 |
| candice |
I can really relate to this it has been done to over and over again |
2/11/2008 |
| amber |
I like your poem it reminds me of my boyfriend
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3/13/2007 |
| Tannu |
it's aright. but you can do BETTER. |
3/7/2007 |
| Heather |
that same stuff you wrote me is how i feel about my ex-boyfriend! I can really relate to it! |
2/21/2007 |
| Jessica |
Its so true guys are real jerks sometimes! and it is stupid how they even thought of going out with someone they would just nvr take care of or be nice to and when they cheat on you is just like having ur life fall apart if u really liked this guy and thought he was the one! Then after Calls crying and says i love you is just the thing that makes u want to be happy but in the end u know hes just going to repte what he has done to you before!! |
2/17/2007 |
| Brown Sugar |
Girl, this is the truth. Men think they can have the cake and eat it too. I know someone who thought that they had found the man of their life but it turned out to be a nightmare. He called her names and disrespected her constantly but when she realived that he was never going to change she left him. She admited tha she was sad but eventually got over it. |
2/13/2007 |
| Sadie |
Your poem was very great because of your style and more |
2/12/2007 |
| not telling |
That peom is the best i have read in a wail and i am so happy that this auther got away from such a evil BF good job alicia |
2/11/2007 |
| bob lee |
it really good |
2/10/2007 |
| kks |
i rwaly liked this poem because it reminds me of matt hardman |
2/9/2007 | |
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