| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| amber |
i likee it |
9/24/2009 |
| Destiny |
I hope you don't mind me using part of the poem in a song. If so im REALLY sorry. |
7/11/2009 |
| Chastidy Staggs |
Hey, thats really good. i just went though a break up and i feel like CRAP! |
5/12/2009 |
| christina |
this peom was really gud i really liked it |
4/28/2009 |
| SA girl |
Hey Jessica.
This is a really touching poem. I really like it.
I'm from South Africa, and in English, we have been asked to find a song lyric which means something to us. We then had to analyse it. Now we have to find a poem that has the same themes. The song I chose was Your Guardian angel by The red jumpsuit apparatus. I feel that your poem is kinda written along the same lines. Would you mind if I use your poem. I will obviously state that it is written by you.
Thanx a lot.
-x- |
3/10/2009 |
| ieshia |
i really like this poem i jus wished it was wrote the oppsite way cas i feel like im in his place and my boyfriend in her he cheated on me leaving me so depressed but i fell that i cant breath without him and i want to forgive him but i feel like that would be the wrong thing to do because jux maybe he will do it again who knowsss... i write poetry |
2/27/2009 |
| amanda |
Dam that was so sad...but it speaks the truth... i liked it |
2/6/2009 |
| SOFIA RAE |
THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM. 1 OUT OF 10...I WOULD GIVE U A 10! GOOD JOB LIKE IT! |
2/4/2009 |
| kaydee |
honey if he abused you it wasn't your fault and i hope you know that by now! |
1/15/2009 |
| Sasha |
That Proper Explains The Break Up I've Just Had! This Is Amazing! x3 |
8/20/2008 |
| you'llneverknow |
i feel ya girl we have all been there but life goes on it just takes lots of time for are wounds to heal |
4/17/2008 |
| Ding |
you help me breath |
4/12/2008 |
| Trish |
i really was in the POEM thx for making me realize its not to late to catch him back :P |
3/10/2008 |
| Demetria C. |
my boyfriend and i are over...just last night. (excuse me...my "ex" and i...)
if only i had the strength or ideal to speak of our long memories or friendship- and then how it just ended and i was (for no reason) blamed...i will also never forget sister. pity.. for how so young we are and still i will never wrap myself around the whole..."this is just a phase" bs guess i should now...right?? i will miss him...forever and always. but what's done is done. HE (our GOD), always has a ways to show people their losses..and now im one of them. this poem speaks to me. for i am a poet to. maybe now i can write a poem of 'overcoming' this triumph. thank-you Jessica...WE STRONG AND LOVIN'!! |
12/1/2007 |
| liz |
yah we have all been in that boat in one point of are lives and we are all ashamed but what makes you different from the rest is that you realized your wrong doing and you will be a better person in knowing and changing how you are in taking thr first step in saying you were wrong * dont give up * |
11/22/2007 |
| Cassandra |
Aww so sad and i loved it |
11/8/2007 |
| Maria |
i think it is grate and it's also the truth my boyfriend told me the same thing but then he break my heart. I LOVED IT. good work jessica. |
7/24/2007 |
| Jordan |
Thatz some deep sh*t. I love it! Im totally goin through that now..... i just havnt decided my ending yet! |
2/16/2007 |
| Ariel |
That ios a great ''BREAK UP'' poem if u truely love the person u r with. |
2/14/2007 |
| andrea kleven |
i don't think i understand it that much but i like it. |
2/14/2007 |
| Marie |
Great poem,I can relate to it from past experiences. |
1/28/2007 |
| tina marie |
i know what that is like |
1/28/2007 |
| Akiko |
I loved the poem it seems so true to me. It is both beautiful and heart breaking to know that someone must feel as I do. I think you really captured the meaning of love and pain. |
1/25/2007 |
| lauren |
hay ya i am honest and i thought that was good i really don't like readin long poems hate it but if it sounds good at the start i keep goin i read all urs cool thanx keep it up but i also hope all ok
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1/24/2007 |
| flower |
this poem is so nice but its true wat she says that wat goes around comes around and it has happened to me !!!! |
1/22/2007 |
| lAuRa |
i love this poem its really good!! |
1/20/2007 |
| lalala |
blesss man dasts a gd poem lovinit lol |
1/18/2007 |
| Abby |
I love this so much.. i started to look for poems for compeitive speech and i would love it so much if you would let me use this |
1/17/2007 |
| Erin McMillan |
Wow! That is amazing... I understand what this means, because I've been through it. Keep up the good work xx |
1/17/2007 |
| midnight purple |
i love it :D |
1/16/2007 |
| black rose |
wow. i just went through a really tought break up. but after getting some of thoes feelings that were in this poem. i let them all go. and now iam happly with another great guy who actully cares about me.. and we are engaged |
1/16/2007 |
