Nolenia
Four teenagers are stuck on a beach on an island in the middle of the ocean. They are castaways on an island. Not just any island. Nolenia!!
| Comments on article "Nolenia" |
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Views and Comments | Date |
| boom boom |
This was simply pathetic. |
1/17/2008 |
| lil b |
ireallyhate this story |
4/16/2007 |
| Page |
It gets off topic i mean: They shoot it then, In the next paragraph it says they shoot it. I absolutly love the vocabulary!! Maybe there could be new speices like: A rat mixed with a lizard. Think out of the box. I would love to have your knowladge with words (I have to use the theasaurus, I cant spell.) Like go into complete detail. Maybe next you could say: "They then came across a small stream, everyone they droped to the floor to drink the precious water. After everyone was finished, everyone started to grow to unbeleivable sizes. Maybe go off to the unexpected.
Really Good Book Though!! |
4/5/2007 |
| pne4life |
sorry but i have to say this- the book had no plot line, the start was crap with no detail (which it should have), nothing relly happened to get me hooked on it and i nearly couldnt bare to read on it was boring although with a lot of work it could be changed but i mean alot please take this with constructive critsium thanks!!
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1/28/2007 |
| joseph ramot |
not a good ending
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11/3/2006 |
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