You Own Me

This one isn't very good, so please comment to let me know what of think of it..
It's like you own me
I do what you say
I do what you want
Every single day
I don't stop till you say to
When you assign me something that's what I do
How do I tear form this grip you have
Because this could lead to something bad

I need to brace myself
For what you say
I need to scream for help
If something in my way
You tell me to kiss you
I can't! I won't! Make me!
You grab my arm "Let me free!
Please just let go"
But you push me down,

"You can't till I say so"
You own me like I'm an animal
You treat me like I'm dirt
Is this payback for something?
Cause it really hurts
You bruise me, hurt me
You say you'll kill me
Do it, I dare you
See if I care
I'm tired of all this pain I bear
But most of all I'm tired that I can't be free
Because you own me
How good is this poem?
I love it!
it's okay.
I don't really like it
It's terrible!
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Published: 12/16/2010
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