Writing Is Like Dancing

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Some people like me
Say that writing is like dancing
Others say that they can’t do anything
I will prove then wrong
All you need to know is
How to get a point out
My writing started a long time ago
I left town and couldn’t get one girl
Off my mind
It hurt so bad
To be away from her....
Now I’m with her and she
Is everything I could ever want
I want to be with her for the rest of my life

Just fyi her name is MELINDA KAY PRICE
What do you think?
It was ok
I liked it
Excellent
loved it, can't get enough
needs work (if so please post a comment on what I need to fix)
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Published: 2/5/2007
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