Why Should I Name It When I Can't Even Figure Out the Plot Yet

Random story again; p.s. the guy is a vampire.
"I love you...a lot but this won't ever work between us" he said, pained, his eyes were dark, swirling with different emotions of love, sorrow, hate. He hated being a blood-sucking monster, living forever in pain, damned. "Please" she pleaded, she pressed herself against him, holding him tightly, squeezing, and hoping he would stay locked there in the embrace. He escaped as easily, holding her arms away from him, keeping her at arm's length as he stepped a few short steps back. She tried walking towards him but it was useless, he was immortal. He could be thousands or millions of miles a way with a blink of an eye, he could just as easily kill a mere mortal, human.

"You can't leave me, you just can't" with desperation in her voice, her blue eyes brimmed with tears. "God" he said, almost soundlessly, and then looked at her with the most pained expression, like from a beautiful angel. His hand fell onto hers, she squeezed it tightly pulling his hands to her chest, letting him feel the beat of her heart, how she loved him more than anything, even more than her own well-being. He blushed slightly, trying to pull his hands away but she kept it there, pulling it back.

He gave a quick sigh, locking eyes with her, he had given in...he would stay, love her the way nobody else would, love her the way she was meant to be loved.
"Promise?" she asked, he smiled kissing her forehead in response.
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Published: 3/23/2010
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