Why Me? Rewrite Chapter 1
I just thought maybe it was a little to fast so here you guys go.
Why me? {Chapter 1} Rewrite
{Sara's pov}
I was in my room picking out a gown to wear for today, because today was my birthday I was finally 18 years old. Now I could go into the market place and who knows maybe get married. I laughed at the thought and finally picked out a gown. It was white and pink then I looked in the mirror to see my long red hair and Blue eyes. Then I heard my downstairs door being broke down I hurried downstair to see two guards with guns I looked at my mother and father. The guards said "The king has decreed that you Mr. and Mrs. Holmes that your daughter is to be sent to the castle to be married to one of the kings 11 sons. Your daughter has to come to the castle at this moment. My father and mother ran to me and said at the same time "Your will never take our child never". Then the guards walked up to mother and father shoots them in the chest.
Everything went slow then they fell to the ground I fell to the ground crying and then I crawled over to my parents bodies. They both looked at me and then my father raised his hand to my face and then his lifeless hand fell to the ground. I turned to my mother she said "I.....l...ove...yo...u", a tear fell from her face then she closed her eyes then she was gone. The guards grabbed my arms and I yelled "let me go let me go". When they finally stopped fighting with me, they troughed me in the back of a horse carrier with many other girls but they all were crying. One of my friend molly came running over to me and she said with a shaken voice "Sara are you ok and your parents are they ok". I cried even harder and that is when we saw the guards drag out my parent's lifeless bodies molly looked in terror as they set a fire on their bodies. I screamed on the top of my lung "NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
One of the guards came up and slapped me. I was like a lighten bolt hit my face and I fell to the ground then molly came and sat next to me. I cried in her arms when the carrier started moving. Then I saw Luna she was crying and when I finally stopped crying Luna came over and said "what do you think is coming to us when we enter the gates"? I looked down and said "I don't know but we have to stay strong and no matter what happens we will be friends". Then about 30 minues later we came to the castle and then we saw out the bars of the window the king and his sons where waiting in a line then we heard girls talking and some were smiling. I rolled my eyes and the door came open. The guards said "come out and line up", so I was the first and molly was the second. So within minutes all the girls were out of the horse carrier and the king nodded his head and his sons came over one by one dragging girls away. They were like man eating sharks taking their prey then I saw Prince Christopher looking within curious in his eyes.
{Prince Christopher}
I look at this girl she was beautiful but I'm not like my brothers I don't like that I just picking out girls for fun or marrying them I want to married to someone I love not some girl who will just throw herself at me . I may be next in line and I am 18 years old but I am not a fool. I looked at my brother James him next to the girl I was looking at and took her friend. I know my brother he raped all of his maids and they are scared to even come into his room so I walked over to this girl. I saw something in her eyes it was mixed depression and sadness then she looked up at me with hate. I wasn't taking any changes so I just grabbed her hand then I walked into the castle. She moved very slow she looked down the whole time I wander what happened to her that she is so depress I'll asked her when we get to my room.
{Molly's pov}
I hope Sara is ok but right now I need to see can I help myself I have heard stories about how Prince James raped any woman he wanted and if you refused he would make sure he got what he wanted. James grabbed me by my arm and I mean he almost pulled my arm off. When we came to a door and when he opened it he dragged me to a chair and throwed me down. Then he walked off to a door and he pulled out a bottle and a glass cup. He poured the liquid in the glass then gave it to me and then when a drop hit my tongue I filled dizzy then I fell to the floor. When I woke up I was nude and James was lying on my body then I looked down at the cover and saw blood. I started crying then James woke up and said "Look on the bright side you get to have my children and be my toy". I cried even harder and then he slapped me I shut my mouth and thought "Why me".
{Sara's pov}
After I told Christopher about what they did to my parents he yelled "They did what they were only to get a person and leave". I looked up at him he has tried to talk to me for about 3 hours now and he has been trying to make me smiled but why would I smile when I just watch my parent get killed in front of my eyes. On his and his father's order and now he wants me to smile. I hope Molly and Luna are ok I'm worried more about molly because she is with that snake James. Luna is with Prince Jack she should be fine he is a great person and I know because I and he were friends and he knew molly, me, and Luna. But his dumb father never knew because he would have taken all of use then. Christopher looked at me and asked "Do you want to talk to me about anything"? I took a deep breath then said "I have NOTHING to say to you but why you could have picked a princess not me if it wasn't for you I would still have parents"!
Christopher looked at me with sadness and then said "Look I know that you hate me but you have to believe that I never wanted to take a person's life and I don't even want to be king not that I wouldn't be good at it but my father has always wanted me to be a king and rule and I'm sorry for my father's destruction". He turned his head then started to walk away and I filed very guilty about being so horrible to him and I wish I could take it back but I can't. He tried to help me but I wanted to be mean. I said "Please don't go I want to say that I'm sorry and you maybe didn't have anything to do with it so I'm very sorry". He turned and walked up to me and took my hand then said "that's ok I know that you are sorry but don't worry we have to go to dinner now". Then there was a knock on the door then a servant came and said "dinner is ready so please come and eat". Christopher Nodded then the door closed and Christopher grabbed my hand then we walked out the door.
{Sara's pov}
I was in my room picking out a gown to wear for today, because today was my birthday I was finally 18 years old. Now I could go into the market place and who knows maybe get married. I laughed at the thought and finally picked out a gown. It was white and pink then I looked in the mirror to see my long red hair and Blue eyes. Then I heard my downstairs door being broke down I hurried downstair to see two guards with guns I looked at my mother and father. The guards said "The king has decreed that you Mr. and Mrs. Holmes that your daughter is to be sent to the castle to be married to one of the kings 11 sons. Your daughter has to come to the castle at this moment. My father and mother ran to me and said at the same time "Your will never take our child never". Then the guards walked up to mother and father shoots them in the chest.
Everything went slow then they fell to the ground I fell to the ground crying and then I crawled over to my parents bodies. They both looked at me and then my father raised his hand to my face and then his lifeless hand fell to the ground. I turned to my mother she said "I.....l...ove...yo...u", a tear fell from her face then she closed her eyes then she was gone. The guards grabbed my arms and I yelled "let me go let me go". When they finally stopped fighting with me, they troughed me in the back of a horse carrier with many other girls but they all were crying. One of my friend molly came running over to me and she said with a shaken voice "Sara are you ok and your parents are they ok". I cried even harder and that is when we saw the guards drag out my parent's lifeless bodies molly looked in terror as they set a fire on their bodies. I screamed on the top of my lung "NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
One of the guards came up and slapped me. I was like a lighten bolt hit my face and I fell to the ground then molly came and sat next to me. I cried in her arms when the carrier started moving. Then I saw Luna she was crying and when I finally stopped crying Luna came over and said "what do you think is coming to us when we enter the gates"? I looked down and said "I don't know but we have to stay strong and no matter what happens we will be friends". Then about 30 minues later we came to the castle and then we saw out the bars of the window the king and his sons where waiting in a line then we heard girls talking and some were smiling. I rolled my eyes and the door came open. The guards said "come out and line up", so I was the first and molly was the second. So within minutes all the girls were out of the horse carrier and the king nodded his head and his sons came over one by one dragging girls away. They were like man eating sharks taking their prey then I saw Prince Christopher looking within curious in his eyes.
{Prince Christopher}
I look at this girl she was beautiful but I'm not like my brothers I don't like that I just picking out girls for fun or marrying them I want to married to someone I love not some girl who will just throw herself at me . I may be next in line and I am 18 years old but I am not a fool. I looked at my brother James him next to the girl I was looking at and took her friend. I know my brother he raped all of his maids and they are scared to even come into his room so I walked over to this girl. I saw something in her eyes it was mixed depression and sadness then she looked up at me with hate. I wasn't taking any changes so I just grabbed her hand then I walked into the castle. She moved very slow she looked down the whole time I wander what happened to her that she is so depress I'll asked her when we get to my room.
{Molly's pov}
I hope Sara is ok but right now I need to see can I help myself I have heard stories about how Prince James raped any woman he wanted and if you refused he would make sure he got what he wanted. James grabbed me by my arm and I mean he almost pulled my arm off. When we came to a door and when he opened it he dragged me to a chair and throwed me down. Then he walked off to a door and he pulled out a bottle and a glass cup. He poured the liquid in the glass then gave it to me and then when a drop hit my tongue I filled dizzy then I fell to the floor. When I woke up I was nude and James was lying on my body then I looked down at the cover and saw blood. I started crying then James woke up and said "Look on the bright side you get to have my children and be my toy". I cried even harder and then he slapped me I shut my mouth and thought "Why me".
{Sara's pov}
After I told Christopher about what they did to my parents he yelled "They did what they were only to get a person and leave". I looked up at him he has tried to talk to me for about 3 hours now and he has been trying to make me smiled but why would I smile when I just watch my parent get killed in front of my eyes. On his and his father's order and now he wants me to smile. I hope Molly and Luna are ok I'm worried more about molly because she is with that snake James. Luna is with Prince Jack she should be fine he is a great person and I know because I and he were friends and he knew molly, me, and Luna. But his dumb father never knew because he would have taken all of use then. Christopher looked at me and asked "Do you want to talk to me about anything"? I took a deep breath then said "I have NOTHING to say to you but why you could have picked a princess not me if it wasn't for you I would still have parents"!
Christopher looked at me with sadness and then said "Look I know that you hate me but you have to believe that I never wanted to take a person's life and I don't even want to be king not that I wouldn't be good at it but my father has always wanted me to be a king and rule and I'm sorry for my father's destruction". He turned his head then started to walk away and I filed very guilty about being so horrible to him and I wish I could take it back but I can't. He tried to help me but I wanted to be mean. I said "Please don't go I want to say that I'm sorry and you maybe didn't have anything to do with it so I'm very sorry". He turned and walked up to me and took my hand then said "that's ok I know that you are sorry but don't worry we have to go to dinner now". Then there was a knock on the door then a servant came and said "dinner is ready so please come and eat". Christopher Nodded then the door closed and Christopher grabbed my hand then we walked out the door.
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