Watch Your Words

I wrote this about my friend, though I won't tell who. This friend of mine is the most cheerful person you will ever meet. She likes almost everybody, and if she doesn't, she fakes it. She is stronger than I could ever be, but inside she is jealous of everyone, and she has been hurt. Little words build up, so watch your words.
One in deceit
Her heart incomplete
Once giggles and laughs
But that was her past..

Words confided her
Secrets were revealed
Outside remains cheerful
Inside is ciaos..

Free flying soul
Now captured and hung
Negativity has only begun
Once souring in the sky..

Now buried to die
Watch your words
For they may scar
And just keep in mind
Tickets to hell never expire..
What do you think?
She shouldn't hold her feelings in like this.
Your friend seems to be alot like me.
Words don't hurt, bruises do.
Great poem and I feel for your friend.
You sound like an excellent friend, help her express herself.
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Published: 8/6/2011
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