Virtual Virtue II

We all have some wishes to be fulfilled in our life.
Everyone has a world of his own;
It makes him laugh in joy or free a sad moan.
Everyone has eyes full of dreams;
It helps him make sweet, holy hymns.
I am not an alteration, nay!
To the dreamland, a visit I pay.

I dream of a future free from any sigh.
I am looking forward to it as days pass by.
I want a life devoid of any blame,
As sitting in the winter beside the warm flame.
I want to live a life free from any sin,
And stick to my words and do what I mean.
I want my destiny to be at Heaven.
Happiness is something I do wanna’ gain!

What do you think about my poem?
Good title but bad poem.
Good poem but bad title.
Bad poem and title.
Good poem and title.
Beautiful.
Excellent.
Hell disgusting, never show me again.
I have no opinion.
It was not very good.
Nice.
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Published: 4/6/2010
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