Unseen Love
This is my first story. I'm sorry if it's boring or sucks, but please let me know if I should continue, If you give me a chance I promise it'll get interesting!! :D OH! And I'm sorry if it's too short or too long (probably short), again, I'm way new to this.. :)
Ugh, I love him so much. What would I be without you, Elliot?
"What's wrong Iris? You look like you got something on your mind..." Elliot said.
I was sitting there on the couch with him in our den. George Lopez was on and we had been watching and laughing, having a good time. An empty bag of Sourpatch Kids lay on the table next to a half-eaten bowl of popcorn.
"I'm just so thankful that I actually have a friend like you" I had said after a couple of seconds, still slightly gazing into his eyes. I know what you're thinking, aw, how cute. Those little lovebirds! but no, me and Elliot aren't like that. I mean, well, we do have this kind of flirtatious thing going on, but really, we're just best buds.
"Yeah, me too. I am pretty great, huh?" he said, "Whatever! You wouldn't be so great if it wasn't for me, don't forget that." We both started laughing. Then he turned back to me, "I'm really glad I have you too. We've been through a lot, and we make a great team, you and me." He said as he flashed that amazingly perfect half smile. Well, just about everything about Elliot is perfect. His black-brown hair, although he buzzed it recently, his ice-blue eyes, his beautiful perfect straight nose on his perfectly angeled faced, with full lips and sun-kissed skin. His body was in perfect shape too. Nice abs, I might add in.
There was a vibrate. Eliiot pulled out his HTC Hero and read the text he had just gotten.
"Ok, time for me to go", he said hopping up from the couch and stretching.
"Aaaww, 'kay, have fun", I said with a pouty lip.
Elliot was going to have a family day today because his parents were going to go on a trip to the Philippines for their 21st anniversary for about 2 or 3 weeks.
"Thanks, see ya later" he said as we pecked eachother's cheeks. He headed for the door and stopped as my twin brother Xavier came in.
"Oh,hey Li (his nick-name for Elliot) you headin out to see the fam?", he said.
"Yeh, probably just gonna go bowling or to the movies, I dunno. Anyway, gotta go, I'm out Vi (his nick-name for Xavier)."
"Aight, hit me up when you free, got a Pgi 233 (a paintball gun), and we need to go to one of the courses so I could kick your ass with it!" Xavier yelled after him.
"Haha, psh you think you got me." Elliot said over his shoulder as he got into his Camaro.
Xavier chuckled and closed the door behind him. He walked over and plopped on the recliner.
"What's up Iri??" You see, me and Xavier were pretty close too. All of our siblings are like that really, we all have really good bonds. There's Victoria, the oldest, who's a senior in college. Sebastian, 2nd oldest, he's a sophomore in college, me and Xavier, and we're seniors in highschool. Then there's Nicolette who is a Freshman, and Sophia who is in 8th grade. Our family was that kinda family that wasn't ever too strict, and everyone except me and Sophia has a pretty good sense of humor. Everyone seems to like us when they meet us, and we're a pretty out-going, fun, loving family. We also seem to have a natural talent for just about everything carved into our genes, and we're all slightly competitive in our own ways and strive to be best. Not in an obnoxious way though. Yeah, that's probably why we get along so well as a family, we're all practically the same. Only mom is loud, out-going and funny, and Dad is slightly quieter and more reserved, but also pretty funny, and those characteristics were split pretty evenly to us all.
"Just watchin George Lopez, where you been?", I said reaching for some popcorn. "Just got back from Foot Locker's at the mall, got me some J's! Look at these Fusion 8's", he said grinning. My eyes widened at the red, black, and white leather design. "Wow, those are actually pretty sexy, damn. Who're you trying to impress?" I said jokingly, because I don't see how you'd impress someone with Jordans...
"You know that new chick, Malori whatever? Well yeah, it's been awhile since... well you know...whadya think?" he said looking at me with a somewhat desperate look in his eyes.
Poor Xavier. His last bitch girlfriend really tore him up. The whore was fooling around in my BROTHER'S ROOM, with one of his "FRIENDS", on his BIRTHDAY. It was a pretty disgusting site too, and I am for sure scarred for life, but let's just say that after that the only grinding going on was her face to the floor. Me and Nikki (Nicolette) didn't get break her nose though because Xavier stopped us, otherwise no one does that kinda shit to my brother. Anyway, they were together for like 3 years, and turned out she'd played him the whole time. It took him awhile to get over it... ANYWAY, back to the present. *snap*
"Yeah, she seemed pretty cool, but if you can't even remember her last name then you guys won't last long, yeeeaah, sorryy.." I said, starting to laugh at him. "Shut-up", he said chuckling. We spent some time talking about it, but then it got kinda quiet and serious.
"Go for it Xavier." I said looking at him with a slightly worried look in my eyes. He looked back up at me with a smirk.
"I will. It's been a while, but I'm still the best player on the field", he said with a most-wanted-guy-in-the-world, kinda smile. I laughed, but I could tell he was nervous. Ugh, he's got nothing to worry about, the chick is probably head over heels for him anyway, I mean, I might've forgotten to mention, but our family is kinda gorgeous too.
We all basically look the same except Victoria and Nicolette. They have brunette hair with a more heart-shaped kind of face structure and blue-green eyes. The rest of us have jet-black hair (Sophia dyed hers reddish-burnette color though) with an oval face structure and gray-blue eyes, but we all have olive-toned skin and bow-shaped lips.
Now, what girl wouldn't want Xavier with his pretty charming personality and pretty good looks too? I got up and kissed him on top of his head and walked away saying, "Chill, you got it." He sighed and started flipping channels.
When I got up to my room, I checked my HTC Evo, and saw I had a message with and image attached. It was from Elliot. I opened it and saw this pretty girl with curly brown hair, big round hazel eyes and caramel skin with a couple freckles here and there. I scrolled down,
"Hey, whadya think of my catch? Lol, I joke, but I just met her n she seem intrstin, wat u thinks? Shuld I go 4 it?" was written under the image.
"Eh, whas da tricc's name?"
"Cassandra"
"She cute, if u finks she'll treat u aiite den go for it"
"Aright, thx g, gotta go, need to try n get her # lol"
"Bwaha, kk gud luck :D"
I sighed, and plugged in my phone to charge. Good for Elliot. Surprisingly he doesn't date that much. Well, then again he is pretty shy too... but then that's where I come in. I'm his right hand in relationships. For some reason though, I didn't really feel like helping him with this one. I mean, why can't he just get her by himself? Since she's seems so pretty, she's gotta be worth the extra effort, right? Why should I have to help him get a girlfriend? If he needs one so bad then he should get her himself.
Whoa. What am I saying? I almost sound jealous. I chuckled to myself and shook my head. Nah, I'm just feeling tired. I'll take a nap and ask him how it went later.
"What's wrong Iris? You look like you got something on your mind..." Elliot said.
I was sitting there on the couch with him in our den. George Lopez was on and we had been watching and laughing, having a good time. An empty bag of Sourpatch Kids lay on the table next to a half-eaten bowl of popcorn.
"I'm just so thankful that I actually have a friend like you" I had said after a couple of seconds, still slightly gazing into his eyes. I know what you're thinking, aw, how cute. Those little lovebirds! but no, me and Elliot aren't like that. I mean, well, we do have this kind of flirtatious thing going on, but really, we're just best buds.
"Yeah, me too. I am pretty great, huh?" he said, "Whatever! You wouldn't be so great if it wasn't for me, don't forget that." We both started laughing. Then he turned back to me, "I'm really glad I have you too. We've been through a lot, and we make a great team, you and me." He said as he flashed that amazingly perfect half smile. Well, just about everything about Elliot is perfect. His black-brown hair, although he buzzed it recently, his ice-blue eyes, his beautiful perfect straight nose on his perfectly angeled faced, with full lips and sun-kissed skin. His body was in perfect shape too. Nice abs, I might add in.
There was a vibrate. Eliiot pulled out his HTC Hero and read the text he had just gotten.
"Ok, time for me to go", he said hopping up from the couch and stretching.
"Aaaww, 'kay, have fun", I said with a pouty lip.
Elliot was going to have a family day today because his parents were going to go on a trip to the Philippines for their 21st anniversary for about 2 or 3 weeks.
"Thanks, see ya later" he said as we pecked eachother's cheeks. He headed for the door and stopped as my twin brother Xavier came in.
"Oh,hey Li (his nick-name for Elliot) you headin out to see the fam?", he said.
"Yeh, probably just gonna go bowling or to the movies, I dunno. Anyway, gotta go, I'm out Vi (his nick-name for Xavier)."
"Aight, hit me up when you free, got a Pgi 233 (a paintball gun), and we need to go to one of the courses so I could kick your ass with it!" Xavier yelled after him.
"Haha, psh you think you got me." Elliot said over his shoulder as he got into his Camaro.
Xavier chuckled and closed the door behind him. He walked over and plopped on the recliner.
"What's up Iri??" You see, me and Xavier were pretty close too. All of our siblings are like that really, we all have really good bonds. There's Victoria, the oldest, who's a senior in college. Sebastian, 2nd oldest, he's a sophomore in college, me and Xavier, and we're seniors in highschool. Then there's Nicolette who is a Freshman, and Sophia who is in 8th grade. Our family was that kinda family that wasn't ever too strict, and everyone except me and Sophia has a pretty good sense of humor. Everyone seems to like us when they meet us, and we're a pretty out-going, fun, loving family. We also seem to have a natural talent for just about everything carved into our genes, and we're all slightly competitive in our own ways and strive to be best. Not in an obnoxious way though. Yeah, that's probably why we get along so well as a family, we're all practically the same. Only mom is loud, out-going and funny, and Dad is slightly quieter and more reserved, but also pretty funny, and those characteristics were split pretty evenly to us all.
"Just watchin George Lopez, where you been?", I said reaching for some popcorn. "Just got back from Foot Locker's at the mall, got me some J's! Look at these Fusion 8's", he said grinning. My eyes widened at the red, black, and white leather design. "Wow, those are actually pretty sexy, damn. Who're you trying to impress?" I said jokingly, because I don't see how you'd impress someone with Jordans...
"You know that new chick, Malori whatever? Well yeah, it's been awhile since... well you know...whadya think?" he said looking at me with a somewhat desperate look in his eyes.
Poor Xavier. His last bitch girlfriend really tore him up. The whore was fooling around in my BROTHER'S ROOM, with one of his "FRIENDS", on his BIRTHDAY. It was a pretty disgusting site too, and I am for sure scarred for life, but let's just say that after that the only grinding going on was her face to the floor. Me and Nikki (Nicolette) didn't get break her nose though because Xavier stopped us, otherwise no one does that kinda shit to my brother. Anyway, they were together for like 3 years, and turned out she'd played him the whole time. It took him awhile to get over it... ANYWAY, back to the present. *snap*
"Yeah, she seemed pretty cool, but if you can't even remember her last name then you guys won't last long, yeeeaah, sorryy.." I said, starting to laugh at him. "Shut-up", he said chuckling. We spent some time talking about it, but then it got kinda quiet and serious.
"Go for it Xavier." I said looking at him with a slightly worried look in my eyes. He looked back up at me with a smirk.
"I will. It's been a while, but I'm still the best player on the field", he said with a most-wanted-guy-in-the-world, kinda smile. I laughed, but I could tell he was nervous. Ugh, he's got nothing to worry about, the chick is probably head over heels for him anyway, I mean, I might've forgotten to mention, but our family is kinda gorgeous too.
We all basically look the same except Victoria and Nicolette. They have brunette hair with a more heart-shaped kind of face structure and blue-green eyes. The rest of us have jet-black hair (Sophia dyed hers reddish-burnette color though) with an oval face structure and gray-blue eyes, but we all have olive-toned skin and bow-shaped lips.
Now, what girl wouldn't want Xavier with his pretty charming personality and pretty good looks too? I got up and kissed him on top of his head and walked away saying, "Chill, you got it." He sighed and started flipping channels.
When I got up to my room, I checked my HTC Evo, and saw I had a message with and image attached. It was from Elliot. I opened it and saw this pretty girl with curly brown hair, big round hazel eyes and caramel skin with a couple freckles here and there. I scrolled down,
"Hey, whadya think of my catch? Lol, I joke, but I just met her n she seem intrstin, wat u thinks? Shuld I go 4 it?" was written under the image.
"Eh, whas da tricc's name?"
"Cassandra"
"She cute, if u finks she'll treat u aiite den go for it"
"Aright, thx g, gotta go, need to try n get her # lol"
"Bwaha, kk gud luck :D"
I sighed, and plugged in my phone to charge. Good for Elliot. Surprisingly he doesn't date that much. Well, then again he is pretty shy too... but then that's where I come in. I'm his right hand in relationships. For some reason though, I didn't really feel like helping him with this one. I mean, why can't he just get her by himself? Since she's seems so pretty, she's gotta be worth the extra effort, right? Why should I have to help him get a girlfriend? If he needs one so bad then he should get her himself.
Whoa. What am I saying? I almost sound jealous. I chuckled to myself and shook my head. Nah, I'm just feeling tired. I'll take a nap and ask him how it went later.
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