Unique Sweet Love Story

A story of two unlikely people falling in love.
It never really occurred to me that a guy like him would ever like me.

It never really occurred to me that a girl like her would ever like me.

He's so loud and obnoxious.

She's so quiet and sweet.

He dresses like a "normal" guy would.

She dresses like any "weird" girl would.

...And yet there is something about him...

...And yet there is something about her...

...That peaks my interest...

...That catches my eye...

He's only talked to me once, so I know very little about him.

She's only spoken to me once, and it wasn't that enlightening.

But soon I began to watch his movements, and I began to wonder...

I began to watch her diligently, but I soon began to wonder...

...What is he thinking about...?

...What is she thinking about...?

...Does he know that I exist...?

...Does she notice me...?

...Does he notice when I stare at him...?

...Does she notice when I try to catch her eye...?

As time passed, I began to grow more persistent...

As time went by, I watched her more closely...

Until that one day...

Until that fateful day...

I decided it was time to give it a try...

I decided to give it a go...

I walked up to him...

I walked up to her...

And said to him...

And said to her...

"I can't stop thinking about you."

I looked at him stunned...

I looked at her stunned...

I continued...

I continued...

"Every time I see you my heart starts pounding."

He looked at me and smiled a crooked smile...

She looked at me and smiled a shy smile...

"I know that this is kind of sudden, but..."

I pulled a ring out of my purse...

I pulled a ring out of my coat pocket...

"Will you be mine... Forever?"

I stared at the ring in shock...

I gaped at the ring like a fish...

"Y-you too?"

I blushed and turned my face to the ground, embarrassed...

I blushed and turned my face up towards the ceiling...

I fiddled with his ring in my hands...

I looked back at her and grabbed her hand...

I looked up as he grabbed my hand, and had a questioning look on my face...

I smiled and put the ring on her finger...

He put the ring he pulled out of his pocket on my finger...

I grabbed the ring she had in her hand and put it on my finger, and smiled...

I was puzzled by what he was doing...

I entwined my fingers in hers...

I blushed again, and smiled at him...

I was glad to see her smiling at me...

I finally got my words back...

I could finally say what I wanted to say...

"Of course I will be yours... After all no one wants to be alone in this world."

The end.
Was this story any good for my first submission?
Great! keep up the good work :)
It was good. work on your writing a bit more.
Could've been much better
Sucked.
Quit writing on buzzle.
Terrible, give up writing period.
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Published: 6/12/2010
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