Unhappy

(CoMmEnT pLzZ)...About living with someone you don’t want to live with but when time comes for you to leave you kind of don’t want to...there are alot of metaphors in this one…
Daddy gone away
Mommy at church
Both unable to come out and play
Where am I to stay
Hair falling out, turning gray
Tears in my face
You’re the in only one that I have
The only one that can try to show me right from wrong
The one only one that can shape me and raise me
Too bad you didn’t make me
Brother and sister living with "mommy"
Raised up right
Too bad that ain’t me
Too bad we all can’t be as lucky
Now daddy’s home
Mommy’s home
I’m no longer alone
I know where I can I stay
But where will you be now that I’m gone away from you and you are gone away from me
Hair long as ever, black and shiny
Smiles on my face but deep inside I don’t feel so great
You’re the only one that tried to raise me right but now I’m going back to2 mommy and daddy
And where are you going to be?
I don’t know and that’s what makes me unhappy
No more chinos every night
No more blockbuster nights
No more R. Kelly and john legend coming out the speakers no more just you, me, and T.V.
Know its mommy, daddy, and me
And I don’t know where you’ll be and that makes me unhappy

By Brittany R.
Published: 4/13/2008
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