Trapped In A Nightmare - Part 2

Chapter 2 & 3. Please comment :)
***Chapter 2

The doorbell rings and I jump.

Austin begins mumbling, "Oh crap. 4 o'clock? Stupid George. I'm going to charge him extra."

***Chapter 3

I hate George.

I hate his bigness.

George is also rich. But despite his money, no woman ever went after George and his groping hands and hot breath. So instead of seeking love, George buys ecstasy.

And who better to go to than a young, skinny, pretty girl who will do anything and everything you wish for?
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Published: 1/5/2011
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