TOO GOOD 4 U - Chapter 13 - (Finale)
Last chapter of this story! Must read!
Sorry people for the long wait, I won't be having my break, because I sort of had one and boy did I get inspired! Yeah, well I actually went on a last minute vacation and I didn't have time to write the last chapter, so yeah. Anyway, enjoy this last chapter and I'll probably be continuing the second story of Love is Deadly soon. <3 And Thank you everyone for your support, you guys are like THE best. Dedications to all my readers!!!! Especially the ones who stuck by me the whole time. :) Thanks, thanks and thanks.
Meg: Lol, I'm not so don't worry about that anymore. I think it was just this story that I was having a bad writer's block on that's why. Each time you say that I bring the magic from the story, I am surprised because it doesn't seem like that to me, but thank you. Aww, I'm glad that I am able to do that, but partly thanks to your support, you also help me finish the story. This last chapter is dedicated x 100 to you, you are one of the few people who I will dedicate it to. <3
Nicole: Aww does that really make you upset? It doesn't matter, I will keep on writing and I'm sorry, it's not very very big romantic scene, but it's good. Thank you. This is dedicated to you. <3
Esmeralda: Lol, you are so right, but I'd also like what other people say. This last chapter is dedicated to you.
Shantel: Oh really? And it's okay. It's not too much drama, enjoy, I dedicate this story to you x 100. Lol thanks for always supporting me.
Cass: Haha I noticed! Of course I'm staying now that I got a really long last minute vacation. Yes some people do inspire me even if you think it's just encouragement. This chapter is dedicated to you. <3
Bloom: Well I'm sorry, first it's not meant to be in this last chapter and secondly I don't really write sex scenes, besides people enjoy some action and drama in romance too!
Saif: Omg really? You are amazing than! Lol. I'm sorry, than the ending may not be as much as you wanted it to be. And I'm not going to take a break. This chapter is dedicated to you.
Paige: Thank you and haha well my amazing commenters here got me back on track when I got a writer's block. This chapter is dedicated to you.
So everyone else: THIS CHAPTER IS DEDICATED TO EVERY LAST ONE OF YOU! ^^ ENJOY!
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Her P.O.V
I wasn't sure how much sleep I got because half the time I was awake in my bedroom, too excited to sleep much. This always happens to me if something exciting is going to happen. But I did get a decent amount of sleep because when I woke up in the morning, I didn't look too horrible in the mirror.
Before I even had a chance to do anything, but brush up and change, I heard a ring at the doorbell and I suspected that it was Hailey. I was right because when I rushed downstairs my mom had the door open and there was Hailey. And than there was the unexpected person. "Woah Mike?" I asked with a laugh. He was standing there being a geek, playing with his DSI. He looked towards me and than sighed. "Don't ask why. I got dragged along." He grumbled.
Than I spotted dad who was standing at the doorway smiling. "Hey Monica." He said than he looked at my mom before greeting her with her name. Than he changed quickly to the subject of the concert. "I'll come back when the concert ends, which is...?" He asked. "Eight." I piped up. He nodded before leaving as swiftly as he appeared. It was strange why my dad was going to leave so quickly, but I guess it's always been like this... Slowly I turned to Mike and Hailey and spoke. "Okay! We have couple of hours to waste!" I stated. "So what do you want to do?"
Both of them just shrugged. But Mike smiled. "Hey, you know that-." He said suddenly, but Hailey stepped on his foot. Okay I've seen enough of this in movies to understand that they didn't want to tell me something or there was a surprise. "What is it?" I sighed. Hailey just shrugged. "Nothing, really." She cut in. I knew that I wasn't going to get anything out of her, so I decided to just let it go...for now anyway. "Do you want to the skate park?" I asked them. "OH would I ever!" Exclaimed Mike. "Nope, I wouldn't. I don't want to break my nails." She replied. I chuckled and looked at Hailey. "Did I mention that there are hot guys there?" I said. Immediately her face lit up. "Than what are we waiting for!? Let's go!"
His P.O.V
If you're wondering why I'm not at Monica's house, than I'll tell you this. It's part of my changed plan, but it wasn't part of my plan to pass the skate park by my driver and see her, Mike and Hailey there. It was part of my plan to see a guy's hands on her waist. I almost exploded, okay maybe not exploded, but I was pissed. Maybe I deserved to see this because after all Monica did see me with Abby...
I gritted my teeth and sucked it in sharply. Again my plans have to change. "Charles, please stop here." I said calmly. The driver nodded and parked into the parking lot. I got out of the limo before Charles could open the door for me and headed swiftly into the skate park.
Her P.O.V
"Thanks...Michael for teaching me how to ripstik." Said Monica softly before giving him a friendly peck on the cheek. No harm done, but then all of a sudden I heard a voice, an unexpected voice. When I turned around, there was the unexpected person who I felt a flash of sudden anger with. "Daniel." I greeted almost casually.
He seemed pissed too and I don't know why he is, I mean gosh he was the one who kissed Abby after all. "Get your hands off my girl." Growled Daniel. Michael put his hands up in the air and backed away. "Woah, woah, I was just teaching her how to-."
He was cut off by Daniel again. "I don't care!" He snapped before grabbing me by the wrist and leading me out of the skate park with everyone staring, including Hailey and Mike (my half-brother). What on earth did he say? His girl? We weren't even dating in the first place! I tried to dig my heels into the ground, but that didn't stop him from pulling me away from the skate park. "What are you doing?" I demanded angrily. "He was just teaching me how to ripstik! Besides! I should be mad at you."
Daniel suddenly stopped and pushed me against a tree. My breath got caught in my throat when I looked at him. "I don't care; all I care about is you." He said softly before pressing his lips onto mine. At first I fought to get him off me because I just wasn't ready to kiss him again, but it was hard not to resist kissing him back.
When we broke apart he gave me a dazzling smile. "I'm sorry for how I was acting... and about Abby..." He trailed off looking into my eyes. "Yeah, yeah. Well if you came here all the way from where Hailey lives to see me, than you are somewhat forgiven." I stated.
Daniel grimaced and shook his head. "Okay, hold on a moment. I know something that will make you forgive me for everything...maybe." He added before running off to his limo.
Within a few minutes, Daniel came back with an acoustic guitar and sat on the ground beside me. "Okay, I have two songs for you. One is the obvious one, it's by Taylor Swift, which you should know to be 'I'm Only Me When I'm With You' and the other one is called Superman by: Joe Brooks." He stated. I smiled. "How about you sing me that Taylor Swift song?" I asked. He smiled back and nodded before he started playing the guitar.
"Friday Night Beneath the stars, in the field behind your yard, you and I are paintin' pictures in the sky. And sometimes we don't say a thing;
just listen to the crickets sing.
Everything I need is right here, by my side.
And I know everything about you
I don't wanna live without you.
I'm only up when you're not down.
Don't wanna fly if you're still on the ground.
It's like no matter what I do.
Well you drive me crazy half the time;
the other half I'm only trying to let you know that what I feel is true.
And I'm only me when I'm with you..."
I closed my eyes and listened throughout the whole song and when Daniel was done. I hugged him. "Wow you sang it amazingly, although I think that Taylor Swift still does a better job." I joked. He laughed and looked at another direction. I turned to look and was surprised and how a small crowd had gathered and was watching. It was than that he started the second song; Superman by: Joe Brooks.
"There are no words, to paint a picture of you girl
Your eyes, those curves, it's like you're from some other world
You walk my way, oh god it's so frustrating.
So why do I disappear when you come near,
It makes me feel so small,
Why do I blow my lines, most every time,
It's like I got no chance at all,
If I could be your superman,
I'd fly you to the stars and back again.
Cos every time you touched my hand,
You feel my powers running through your veins
But I can only write this song,
And tell you that I'm not that strong.
Cos I'm no superman, I hope you like me as I am..."
I only have heard of Joe Brooks once and I think I heard that song once too and he was good. But in my opinion Daniel might be just a little bit better, although I wasn't going to tell him that!
When he was done I gave him a kiss on the cheek and I heard a small crowd clapping.
"You could be a rock star." I told him. He chuckled. "Yeah, maybe, but I'm not exactly good with super large crowds." He said slowly. I wanted to tell him that there was already a crowd who was listening, but it wasn't a super large crowd! "So do you want to come to the concert with me tonight?" I asked. "Oh would I ever? I thought you'd never ask." Said Daniel with a wink. I punched him in the arm lightly as the crowd thinned out to just Mike and Hailey.
They smiled. "You did good Daniel, but I didn't think this was what you planned." Said Hailey. Daniel just shrugged sheepishly. "I guess the anger got the best of me." He replied. "How about an encore?" Asked Mike. Daniel laughed and nodded. "Okay fine...but first..." He paused for a moment before taking something out of his pocket and handing it to me. "It's a gift from me for being so stupid." He said before he started to play the guitar again.
I looked at it and opened it to find a cute card and a Taylor Swift autograph! I smiled to myself and read the card. 'I love you, I love you, I love you! Please forgive me for everything and even if you don't, I still love you!' I smiled at Daniel and cut him in the middle of his song. "I love you too." I said softly.
~ The End! ~
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Haha, so comment. <3 And I'll probably be starting on the second story of Love is Deadly! ^^ Once again thanks everyone for your support, love ya guys! :D
Meg: Lol, I'm not so don't worry about that anymore. I think it was just this story that I was having a bad writer's block on that's why. Each time you say that I bring the magic from the story, I am surprised because it doesn't seem like that to me, but thank you. Aww, I'm glad that I am able to do that, but partly thanks to your support, you also help me finish the story. This last chapter is dedicated x 100 to you, you are one of the few people who I will dedicate it to. <3
Nicole: Aww does that really make you upset? It doesn't matter, I will keep on writing and I'm sorry, it's not very very big romantic scene, but it's good. Thank you. This is dedicated to you. <3
Esmeralda: Lol, you are so right, but I'd also like what other people say. This last chapter is dedicated to you.
Shantel: Oh really? And it's okay. It's not too much drama, enjoy, I dedicate this story to you x 100. Lol thanks for always supporting me.
Cass: Haha I noticed! Of course I'm staying now that I got a really long last minute vacation. Yes some people do inspire me even if you think it's just encouragement. This chapter is dedicated to you. <3
Bloom: Well I'm sorry, first it's not meant to be in this last chapter and secondly I don't really write sex scenes, besides people enjoy some action and drama in romance too!
Saif: Omg really? You are amazing than! Lol. I'm sorry, than the ending may not be as much as you wanted it to be. And I'm not going to take a break. This chapter is dedicated to you.
Paige: Thank you and haha well my amazing commenters here got me back on track when I got a writer's block. This chapter is dedicated to you.
So everyone else: THIS CHAPTER IS DEDICATED TO EVERY LAST ONE OF YOU! ^^ ENJOY!
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Her P.O.V
I wasn't sure how much sleep I got because half the time I was awake in my bedroom, too excited to sleep much. This always happens to me if something exciting is going to happen. But I did get a decent amount of sleep because when I woke up in the morning, I didn't look too horrible in the mirror.
Before I even had a chance to do anything, but brush up and change, I heard a ring at the doorbell and I suspected that it was Hailey. I was right because when I rushed downstairs my mom had the door open and there was Hailey. And than there was the unexpected person. "Woah Mike?" I asked with a laugh. He was standing there being a geek, playing with his DSI. He looked towards me and than sighed. "Don't ask why. I got dragged along." He grumbled.
Than I spotted dad who was standing at the doorway smiling. "Hey Monica." He said than he looked at my mom before greeting her with her name. Than he changed quickly to the subject of the concert. "I'll come back when the concert ends, which is...?" He asked. "Eight." I piped up. He nodded before leaving as swiftly as he appeared. It was strange why my dad was going to leave so quickly, but I guess it's always been like this... Slowly I turned to Mike and Hailey and spoke. "Okay! We have couple of hours to waste!" I stated. "So what do you want to do?"
Both of them just shrugged. But Mike smiled. "Hey, you know that-." He said suddenly, but Hailey stepped on his foot. Okay I've seen enough of this in movies to understand that they didn't want to tell me something or there was a surprise. "What is it?" I sighed. Hailey just shrugged. "Nothing, really." She cut in. I knew that I wasn't going to get anything out of her, so I decided to just let it go...for now anyway. "Do you want to the skate park?" I asked them. "OH would I ever!" Exclaimed Mike. "Nope, I wouldn't. I don't want to break my nails." She replied. I chuckled and looked at Hailey. "Did I mention that there are hot guys there?" I said. Immediately her face lit up. "Than what are we waiting for!? Let's go!"
His P.O.V
If you're wondering why I'm not at Monica's house, than I'll tell you this. It's part of my changed plan, but it wasn't part of my plan to pass the skate park by my driver and see her, Mike and Hailey there. It was part of my plan to see a guy's hands on her waist. I almost exploded, okay maybe not exploded, but I was pissed. Maybe I deserved to see this because after all Monica did see me with Abby...
I gritted my teeth and sucked it in sharply. Again my plans have to change. "Charles, please stop here." I said calmly. The driver nodded and parked into the parking lot. I got out of the limo before Charles could open the door for me and headed swiftly into the skate park.
Her P.O.V
"Thanks...Michael for teaching me how to ripstik." Said Monica softly before giving him a friendly peck on the cheek. No harm done, but then all of a sudden I heard a voice, an unexpected voice. When I turned around, there was the unexpected person who I felt a flash of sudden anger with. "Daniel." I greeted almost casually.
He seemed pissed too and I don't know why he is, I mean gosh he was the one who kissed Abby after all. "Get your hands off my girl." Growled Daniel. Michael put his hands up in the air and backed away. "Woah, woah, I was just teaching her how to-."
He was cut off by Daniel again. "I don't care!" He snapped before grabbing me by the wrist and leading me out of the skate park with everyone staring, including Hailey and Mike (my half-brother). What on earth did he say? His girl? We weren't even dating in the first place! I tried to dig my heels into the ground, but that didn't stop him from pulling me away from the skate park. "What are you doing?" I demanded angrily. "He was just teaching me how to ripstik! Besides! I should be mad at you."
Daniel suddenly stopped and pushed me against a tree. My breath got caught in my throat when I looked at him. "I don't care; all I care about is you." He said softly before pressing his lips onto mine. At first I fought to get him off me because I just wasn't ready to kiss him again, but it was hard not to resist kissing him back.
When we broke apart he gave me a dazzling smile. "I'm sorry for how I was acting... and about Abby..." He trailed off looking into my eyes. "Yeah, yeah. Well if you came here all the way from where Hailey lives to see me, than you are somewhat forgiven." I stated.
Daniel grimaced and shook his head. "Okay, hold on a moment. I know something that will make you forgive me for everything...maybe." He added before running off to his limo.
Within a few minutes, Daniel came back with an acoustic guitar and sat on the ground beside me. "Okay, I have two songs for you. One is the obvious one, it's by Taylor Swift, which you should know to be 'I'm Only Me When I'm With You' and the other one is called Superman by: Joe Brooks." He stated. I smiled. "How about you sing me that Taylor Swift song?" I asked. He smiled back and nodded before he started playing the guitar.
"Friday Night Beneath the stars, in the field behind your yard, you and I are paintin' pictures in the sky. And sometimes we don't say a thing;
just listen to the crickets sing.
Everything I need is right here, by my side.
And I know everything about you
I don't wanna live without you.
I'm only up when you're not down.
Don't wanna fly if you're still on the ground.
It's like no matter what I do.
Well you drive me crazy half the time;
the other half I'm only trying to let you know that what I feel is true.
And I'm only me when I'm with you..."
I closed my eyes and listened throughout the whole song and when Daniel was done. I hugged him. "Wow you sang it amazingly, although I think that Taylor Swift still does a better job." I joked. He laughed and looked at another direction. I turned to look and was surprised and how a small crowd had gathered and was watching. It was than that he started the second song; Superman by: Joe Brooks.
"There are no words, to paint a picture of you girl
Your eyes, those curves, it's like you're from some other world
You walk my way, oh god it's so frustrating.
So why do I disappear when you come near,
It makes me feel so small,
Why do I blow my lines, most every time,
It's like I got no chance at all,
If I could be your superman,
I'd fly you to the stars and back again.
Cos every time you touched my hand,
You feel my powers running through your veins
But I can only write this song,
And tell you that I'm not that strong.
Cos I'm no superman, I hope you like me as I am..."
I only have heard of Joe Brooks once and I think I heard that song once too and he was good. But in my opinion Daniel might be just a little bit better, although I wasn't going to tell him that!
When he was done I gave him a kiss on the cheek and I heard a small crowd clapping.
"You could be a rock star." I told him. He chuckled. "Yeah, maybe, but I'm not exactly good with super large crowds." He said slowly. I wanted to tell him that there was already a crowd who was listening, but it wasn't a super large crowd! "So do you want to come to the concert with me tonight?" I asked. "Oh would I ever? I thought you'd never ask." Said Daniel with a wink. I punched him in the arm lightly as the crowd thinned out to just Mike and Hailey.
They smiled. "You did good Daniel, but I didn't think this was what you planned." Said Hailey. Daniel just shrugged sheepishly. "I guess the anger got the best of me." He replied. "How about an encore?" Asked Mike. Daniel laughed and nodded. "Okay fine...but first..." He paused for a moment before taking something out of his pocket and handing it to me. "It's a gift from me for being so stupid." He said before he started to play the guitar again.
I looked at it and opened it to find a cute card and a Taylor Swift autograph! I smiled to myself and read the card. 'I love you, I love you, I love you! Please forgive me for everything and even if you don't, I still love you!' I smiled at Daniel and cut him in the middle of his song. "I love you too." I said softly.
~ The End! ~
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Haha, so comment. <3 And I'll probably be starting on the second story of Love is Deadly! ^^ Once again thanks everyone for your support, love ya guys! :D
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