TOO GOOD 4 U - Chapter 12
When I finally opened the door again, I was somewhat surprised that Abby was still there, but she didn't look so happy. "What is wrong with you?" She demanded, while placing two hands on her hips.
Hey again! This would probably be the second last chapter to this story...or maybe the third last. I wanted to make it longer, but I wrote too much unexpected turns that wasn't planned. *Sigh* Now I'm have this big writer's block and I've been staring blankly at the blank page, but I got through it...Only after the next chapter...I'm thinking about taking a break on writing for a little while.I feel like it because I lost a lot of motivation for some reason, but thanks to some of you guys who stick to me regardless how long I take to write it out, I got a little more, so thank you. :)
June: Lol, well she just did, but don't worry, he's going to bring it to her. :)
Nicole: Thank you, thank you, thank you. Your post was one of the few that made me smile. And Yeah I realized about the posting and the slowness, I thought I would post faster in the summer, but I guess not.
Meg: Haha, yeah Daniel, but he will fix it. And thank you, you supported me for this story and the other and well I don't know how to thank you. <3
Esmeralda: You guessed it ;)
Cass: That's funny, because I thought that all my fans inspire me to write more, not the other way round! I mean I don't feel like writing this story was that great, it felt somehow empty, but thank you, I'm glad to know that I inspired you. Any time you post it on Buzzle, tell me and I will support you. :)
To everyone else: Thank you as always, you supported me in this story when I didn't really want to finish it and when writing this story actually felt like a chore! I probably should have posted this on the last chapter, but it doesn't matter, so thanks again. :D
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His P.O.V
When I finally opened the door again, I was somewhat surprised that Abby was still there, but she didn't look so happy. "What is wrong with you?" She demanded, while placing two hands on her hips. I just glared at her and spoke, try to be calm. "I'm sorry, but I need to go now, for...err business." I lied before quickly rushing past her before she had a chance to talk.
I quickly headed to my car and slid into it before flooring the pedal. I wasn't sure if Monica was still staying at her father's place, but I had to check, I mean that was probably my only hope of telling her that Abby tried to kiss me and that I loved her.
It was hard to decide what to do with Abby because I didn't tell her yet, but I would have to sooner or later.
When I finally got to Monica's house, I quickly got out and ran to the door bell. I started to press it and continued to do so impatiently. Suddenly the door flew open and Mike I was standing there eating a bowl of ice cream. I wanted to laugh, but I knew better to.
"Is Monica here?" I asked before Mike had a chance to speak. He scratched his head and shook his head. "No, sorry she left a few minutes ago... you just missed her." Replied Mike. Frustrated, I wall beside the door. "Woah, chill out, don't kill my house." He said. I looked at him and sighed. "Sorry about that."
"So what went wrong?" Asked Mike. I looked at him in confusion until he spoke again. "Monica looked upset when she left and she said something about not wanting to see you again..." He said slowly. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath in before letting it out. "She just saw me kiss my ex, well more like my ex kiss me." I grumbled. Mike just crossed his arms and shakes his head at me. "No wonder! Well if you really like Monica, you would chase after her and I'm only assuming that you are right?" He asked as he continued to speak before I had a chance to reply. "Okay, so if you are, than I'll tell you this. She lives in Cambridge, six hours away from here...the rest you sort of have to figure out yourself..."
"But she could be anywhere in Cambridge!" I exclaimed shaking my head. "Exactly, but it's sort of your fault if you kiss your ex-girlfriend or that you let her kiss her. I don't know the exact location...maybe you can ask my dad..." Said Mike slowly. "Ask me about what Mike?" Questioned Monica's dad coming into view.
Her P.O.V
I watched as the outskirts of the town changed into farmland as my mom drove through it. I sighed as I couldn't help thinking that this was it; that I wasn't going to see Daniel again...possibly ever. My heart ached slightly, but the more I thought about everything that happened the worse it got. As time went by, I began to fall asleep.
By the time I woke up, the sun was setting, making a dazzling orange, red and yellow. I could recognize the area we where in, so it meant that we were close to home, just about ten to fifteen minutes away. I yawned as I looked at the time, which read 7:39 and than looked towards my mom. She looked tired and worn out, probably from the drive and watching over me.
"Mom?" I mumbled. "Yes?" She asked. "Thanks for everything...like sticking by me." I replied. She gave me a quick smile. "You're welcome, that's what moms are for aren't they?"
When the car finally stopped, I got out wordlessly and went to the trunk to grab my suitcase before heading for the front door first. My mom was behind me and as she unlocked the house, she spoke, but got cut off when her cell phone rang.
"Hello? Oh hey and okay, so they'll be here tomorrow afternoon? Alright that's fine. Should I tell-. Fine, I'll talk to you soon."
I was looking at her, curious at what she was talking about. "Hey who called mom?" I asked looking towards her. She had a smile on her face and she breathed out. "You dad and he told me that he's coming tomorrow with Hailey, so there was a small change of plans with that, but nevertheless most of it is the same, you're still going to watch the concert." She replied. Somehow I didn't believe that's what all she had to say because I heard more when she was talking, but I let it be and started to drag my suitcase up the stairs.
I sighed as I went into my room and placed my suitcase down. I couldn't help but remember every touch and every kiss that Daniel had given me... That when I hoped that may be...just maybe we could actually have a relationship going... Now it's probably not going to happen.
I felt frustrated and I wasn't even sure why. It's not like we were dating before, so did this mean I was just jealous of seeing a girl kiss Daniel? Or was it the other way round, that Daniel kissed the girl? Well whichever it was, I was pissed and I knew that. If I see him again, I wouldn't know what to do though... Maybe I should whack him senseless...hmm that would be a good idea! Only I might not ever see him again.
His P.O.V
I stared at the phone, debating on whether or not I should call Abby and lay it down. I thought for a moment and decided it was better sooner than later. With that I quickly dialed her number and it rang three times before she answered.
"Hello?" Asked a voice on the other line. "Hey Abby?" I asked. "Yeah?" She said. "I'm going to say sorry for two things. One is I'm sorry about ditching you like that today and the second is that I can't take you back anymore...I'm in love with another girl." I stated. I didn't expect her to take it too well and of course she didn't. "WHAT?!" She screamed on the other line. "So you're dumping me over some other stupid girl?" Demanded Abby. "Umm...I never even said we were dating again, so no I'm not. I'm sorry again, I hope you can get your old boyfriend back." I said bitterly before hanging up on her.
I breathed out and laid on my bed, while staring at the ceiling to think. I wasn't sure whether I should be excited or not for tomorrow, the good thing is that I would be able to explain everything to Monica, but the bad thing is that I won't know how she will react. I mean what if she doesn't like me anymore? What if I dumped Abby for no reason? I sighed as I thought some more and came slightly to my reason. I liked Monica's father, he was nice when he told me that I could go with Hailey tomorrow and talk to her.
I chuckled at the thought about the Taylor Swift concert. From the beginning I knew that she was an obsessed girl about Taylor and her music. Than suddenly an idea came into my mind.
I could do it! I could perform a Taylor Swift song on my guitar and sing it to her. It would be perfect! I should do that after the concert...or maybe before? Either way, I was sure that Monica was going to love it! Smiling to myself I sat up and picked up my guitar, only to realize that I had barely played a Taylor Swift song before, which means that I had to learn it in a few hours. How hard could it be? I had to admit that I was pretty good at guitar, I started in high school and in those few years, you can say I became a pro as the students would say.
Quickly I sat up and went to my laptop to scan the internet for a couple of her songs and decide which one to play. Oh man...I could just feel it, Monica is really going to love it! Or at least I think she's going to love it...
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Okay, Comment!
And vote on whether or not I should take a break from writing, I feel like I'm losing it a bit...
June: Lol, well she just did, but don't worry, he's going to bring it to her. :)
Nicole: Thank you, thank you, thank you. Your post was one of the few that made me smile. And Yeah I realized about the posting and the slowness, I thought I would post faster in the summer, but I guess not.
Meg: Haha, yeah Daniel, but he will fix it. And thank you, you supported me for this story and the other and well I don't know how to thank you. <3
Esmeralda: You guessed it ;)
Cass: That's funny, because I thought that all my fans inspire me to write more, not the other way round! I mean I don't feel like writing this story was that great, it felt somehow empty, but thank you, I'm glad to know that I inspired you. Any time you post it on Buzzle, tell me and I will support you. :)
To everyone else: Thank you as always, you supported me in this story when I didn't really want to finish it and when writing this story actually felt like a chore! I probably should have posted this on the last chapter, but it doesn't matter, so thanks again. :D
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His P.O.V
When I finally opened the door again, I was somewhat surprised that Abby was still there, but she didn't look so happy. "What is wrong with you?" She demanded, while placing two hands on her hips. I just glared at her and spoke, try to be calm. "I'm sorry, but I need to go now, for...err business." I lied before quickly rushing past her before she had a chance to talk.
I quickly headed to my car and slid into it before flooring the pedal. I wasn't sure if Monica was still staying at her father's place, but I had to check, I mean that was probably my only hope of telling her that Abby tried to kiss me and that I loved her.
It was hard to decide what to do with Abby because I didn't tell her yet, but I would have to sooner or later.
When I finally got to Monica's house, I quickly got out and ran to the door bell. I started to press it and continued to do so impatiently. Suddenly the door flew open and Mike I was standing there eating a bowl of ice cream. I wanted to laugh, but I knew better to.
"Is Monica here?" I asked before Mike had a chance to speak. He scratched his head and shook his head. "No, sorry she left a few minutes ago... you just missed her." Replied Mike. Frustrated, I wall beside the door. "Woah, chill out, don't kill my house." He said. I looked at him and sighed. "Sorry about that."
"So what went wrong?" Asked Mike. I looked at him in confusion until he spoke again. "Monica looked upset when she left and she said something about not wanting to see you again..." He said slowly. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath in before letting it out. "She just saw me kiss my ex, well more like my ex kiss me." I grumbled. Mike just crossed his arms and shakes his head at me. "No wonder! Well if you really like Monica, you would chase after her and I'm only assuming that you are right?" He asked as he continued to speak before I had a chance to reply. "Okay, so if you are, than I'll tell you this. She lives in Cambridge, six hours away from here...the rest you sort of have to figure out yourself..."
"But she could be anywhere in Cambridge!" I exclaimed shaking my head. "Exactly, but it's sort of your fault if you kiss your ex-girlfriend or that you let her kiss her. I don't know the exact location...maybe you can ask my dad..." Said Mike slowly. "Ask me about what Mike?" Questioned Monica's dad coming into view.
Her P.O.V
I watched as the outskirts of the town changed into farmland as my mom drove through it. I sighed as I couldn't help thinking that this was it; that I wasn't going to see Daniel again...possibly ever. My heart ached slightly, but the more I thought about everything that happened the worse it got. As time went by, I began to fall asleep.
By the time I woke up, the sun was setting, making a dazzling orange, red and yellow. I could recognize the area we where in, so it meant that we were close to home, just about ten to fifteen minutes away. I yawned as I looked at the time, which read 7:39 and than looked towards my mom. She looked tired and worn out, probably from the drive and watching over me.
"Mom?" I mumbled. "Yes?" She asked. "Thanks for everything...like sticking by me." I replied. She gave me a quick smile. "You're welcome, that's what moms are for aren't they?"
When the car finally stopped, I got out wordlessly and went to the trunk to grab my suitcase before heading for the front door first. My mom was behind me and as she unlocked the house, she spoke, but got cut off when her cell phone rang.
"Hello? Oh hey and okay, so they'll be here tomorrow afternoon? Alright that's fine. Should I tell-. Fine, I'll talk to you soon."
I was looking at her, curious at what she was talking about. "Hey who called mom?" I asked looking towards her. She had a smile on her face and she breathed out. "You dad and he told me that he's coming tomorrow with Hailey, so there was a small change of plans with that, but nevertheless most of it is the same, you're still going to watch the concert." She replied. Somehow I didn't believe that's what all she had to say because I heard more when she was talking, but I let it be and started to drag my suitcase up the stairs.
I sighed as I went into my room and placed my suitcase down. I couldn't help but remember every touch and every kiss that Daniel had given me... That when I hoped that may be...just maybe we could actually have a relationship going... Now it's probably not going to happen.
I felt frustrated and I wasn't even sure why. It's not like we were dating before, so did this mean I was just jealous of seeing a girl kiss Daniel? Or was it the other way round, that Daniel kissed the girl? Well whichever it was, I was pissed and I knew that. If I see him again, I wouldn't know what to do though... Maybe I should whack him senseless...hmm that would be a good idea! Only I might not ever see him again.
His P.O.V
I stared at the phone, debating on whether or not I should call Abby and lay it down. I thought for a moment and decided it was better sooner than later. With that I quickly dialed her number and it rang three times before she answered.
"Hello?" Asked a voice on the other line. "Hey Abby?" I asked. "Yeah?" She said. "I'm going to say sorry for two things. One is I'm sorry about ditching you like that today and the second is that I can't take you back anymore...I'm in love with another girl." I stated. I didn't expect her to take it too well and of course she didn't. "WHAT?!" She screamed on the other line. "So you're dumping me over some other stupid girl?" Demanded Abby. "Umm...I never even said we were dating again, so no I'm not. I'm sorry again, I hope you can get your old boyfriend back." I said bitterly before hanging up on her.
I breathed out and laid on my bed, while staring at the ceiling to think. I wasn't sure whether I should be excited or not for tomorrow, the good thing is that I would be able to explain everything to Monica, but the bad thing is that I won't know how she will react. I mean what if she doesn't like me anymore? What if I dumped Abby for no reason? I sighed as I thought some more and came slightly to my reason. I liked Monica's father, he was nice when he told me that I could go with Hailey tomorrow and talk to her.
I chuckled at the thought about the Taylor Swift concert. From the beginning I knew that she was an obsessed girl about Taylor and her music. Than suddenly an idea came into my mind.
I could do it! I could perform a Taylor Swift song on my guitar and sing it to her. It would be perfect! I should do that after the concert...or maybe before? Either way, I was sure that Monica was going to love it! Smiling to myself I sat up and picked up my guitar, only to realize that I had barely played a Taylor Swift song before, which means that I had to learn it in a few hours. How hard could it be? I had to admit that I was pretty good at guitar, I started in high school and in those few years, you can say I became a pro as the students would say.
Quickly I sat up and went to my laptop to scan the internet for a couple of her songs and decide which one to play. Oh man...I could just feel it, Monica is really going to love it! Or at least I think she's going to love it...
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And vote on whether or not I should take a break from writing, I feel like I'm losing it a bit...
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