To Whom My Heart Belongs To

I want to improve my writing, so I would like if you would comment. Thank you.
To whom my heart belongs to

Your smile brightens my world
When my world has darken

Your voice is a song
And I just can't stop singing

Your love for me is a life jacket
When I'm stuck in a life-threatening storm

You are my heart
Giving life through my veins

You are my everything
What do you think about the poem?
I love it
It's okay
It needs work
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Published: 5/3/2010
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